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influence of human being on the world ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species loss of biodiversity what are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity ?what solution can you suggest?

influence of human being on the world ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species loss of biodiversity what are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? what solution can you suggest? QJ2b

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In conclusion
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