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Individuals Cannot Improve Environment; Only Governments And Big Companies Can Make A Difference v.1

Individuals Cannot Improve Environment; Only Governments And Big Companies Can Make A Difference v. 1
Everyone is becoming aware that the environment is becoming a serious issue. There is bad air and water pollution everywhere & that the hole is ozone layer is causing cancer. This is not an issue which could only be solved by government & big companies. Individuals can create a large impact if they take care of the environment in their day to day lives. Individuals are equally responsible for the environment. They have to & they should contribute their one bit to protect our environment. The first and the foremost, individuals can take care of the way they dispose the waste. Throwing away garbage to water bodies is a threat to marine life. It is also important to make sure that we do not buy goods in plastic bottles and cans which add to our waste. As we all know plastic is not biodegradable & is a big threat to our environment. Tons of plastic accumulate every day in every corner of the world. If every one of us take care it, we can make a significant change in this situation. Even when we travel to some far destination, we can avoid using plastic containers, bags & bottles for carrying our food items. Instead, we can use things which are eco-friendly. Careful use of water is also an important matter in terms of environmental issue. As we all know, water scarcity hits most parts of the world. In countries like Australia, immense amount of water is being used to wash cars and for swimming pools. The use of water can be minimized by using recycled water for other purposes, e. g. Garden, toilets, car wash etc. It is also important that government and factories can do major things which a single individual cannot by running awareness campaign about environmental issues. In summary, both Individual and big companies together can this world a better place to live.
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environment
is becoming a serious issue. There is
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bad
air and
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water
pollution everywhere & that the hole is ozone layer is causing cancer. This is not an issue which could
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only
be solved
by
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government
&
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big
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companies
.
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Individuals
can create a large impact if they take care of the
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environment
in their
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day to day
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lives
.
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Individuals
are
equally
responsible for the
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environment
. They
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have to
& they should contribute their one bit to protect our environment.

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first
and the foremost,
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individuals
can take care of the way they dispose the waste. Throwing away garbage to
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water
bodies is a threat to marine life. It is
also
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important
to
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make
sure that we do not
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buy
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goods
in
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plastic
bottles and cans which
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add
to our waste. As we all know
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plastic
is not biodegradable & is a
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big
threat to our
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environment
. Tons of
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plastic
accumulate every day in every corner of the world. If every one of us take care it, we can
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make
a significant
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change
in this situation. Even when we travel to
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some
far destination, we can avoid using
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plastic
containers, bags & bottles for carrying our food items.
Instead
, we can
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use
things which are eco-friendly.

Careful
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use
of
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water
is
also
an
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important
matter in terms of environmental issue. As we all know,
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water
scarcity hits most parts of the world. In countries like Australia, immense amount of
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water
is being
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used
to wash cars and for swimming pools. The
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use
of
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water
can
be minimized
by using recycled
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water
for other purposes,
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e. g.
Garden, toilets, car wash etc.

It is
also
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important
that
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government
and factories can do major things which a single
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individual
cannot by running awareness campaign about environmental issues.

In summary, both
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Individual
and
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big
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companies
together can this world a better place to
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live
.
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IELTS essay Individuals Cannot Improve Environment; Only Governments And Big Companies Can Make A Difference v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
316 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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