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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? What other measures do you think might be effective?

There is no dought petrol mostly uses in the car industry and some people the cost of petrol can resolve contamination and increasing traffic. I'm afraid I have to disagree with this statement because there are many other ways to solve this issue. Obviously, these days any middle-class people can buy cars. But if the price for the fuel goes up, it reflects in their budget. A not only budget of these families will be changing, but the prices of the goods rise in this circumstance because the net cost for the transportation will be going up. Maybe rising prices can bring more economic advantages to a country by tax, but taxes also will be collected from people of the country. Another point to consider is instead of using fossil fuel and polluting our air with Carbon dioxide. We can use alternative energy sources like wind and sunlight energy and use it for cars because significant work has been done in electric cars. The only problem is that electric cars are expensive for the middle-class, but the car industry companies doing more investigations and competition between them will lead to good results. If scientists do more researches in this area, the human can leave for generation better future. In conclusion, although modern humanity faces various problems, such as global warming and nature pollution, these problems are not insurmountable. In my view, it is not only one government's, but it is also all humanity responsibility to tackle these issues, and they should begin now by considering some of the solutions proposed above.
There is
no dought
petrol
mostly
uses
in the
car
industry and
some
people
the cost of petrol can resolve contamination and increasing traffic. I'm afraid I
have to
disagree with this statement
because
there are
many
other ways to solve this issue.

Obviously
, these days any middle-
class
people
can
buy
cars
.
But
if the price for the fuel goes up, it reflects in their budget. A not
only
budget of these families will be changing,
but
the prices of the
goods
rise in this circumstance
because
the net cost for the transportation will be going up. Maybe rising prices can bring more economic advantages to a country by tax,
but
taxes
also
will
be collected
from
people
of the country.

Another point to consider is
instead
of using fossil fuel and polluting our air with Carbon dioxide. We can
use
alternative energy sources like wind and sunlight energy and
use
it for
cars
because
significant work has
been done
in electric
cars
. The
only
problem is that electric
cars
are expensive for the middle-
class
,
but
the
car
industry
companies
doing more investigations and competition between them will lead to
good
results. If scientists do more researches in this area, the human can
leave
for generation better future.

In conclusion
, although modern humanity faces various problems, such as global warming and nature pollution, these problems are not insurmountable. In my view, it is not
only
one
government
's,
but
it is
also
all humanity responsibility to tackle these issues, and they should
begin
now
by considering
some of the
solutions proposed above.
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IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. with the statement? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
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