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all cars that burn fussel fuels should be banned and eletronic car should be replaced them

all cars that burn fussel fuels should be banned and eletronic car should be replaced them GM3OL
Due to increasing number of private vechile air polution in environment is increasing day by day because fossil fule emit by these vehicles damaging the environment badly. some people assert that electoric car should replace them. I agree with this statement and i will explicate it in upcoming paragraph with reason in upcoming paragraph
Due to increasing number of private
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vechile
air
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polution
in environment is increasing day by day
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fossil
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emit by these vehicles damaging the environment
badly
.
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some
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people
assert that
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electoric
car should replace them. I
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agree
with this statement and
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will explicate it in upcoming paragraph with reason in upcoming
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IELTS essay all cars that burn fussel fuels should be banned and eletronic car should be replaced them

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
53 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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