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Now a days many children play outdoor games. Some People said that they play indoors games. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Now a days many children play outdoor games. Some People said that they play indoors games. 2bxLA

In modern era many teenager play games out of door like football and cricket. However many individual think that they play game inside the home I disagree that children play indoors games on mobile or computer On the hand I think they play games out of door in the big gardens to become physically fit. Moreover it helps them to become active toward whole day work. For instance a study taken by health club who told that 99percent ch of outdoor games help them to become physically and mentally fit

In modern era This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenileadolescent
teenager
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhitshowdramaperformancecomedymusical
play
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 out of door like football and cricket. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 individual This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhitshowdramaperformancecomedymusical
play
 game inside the home I disagree that children You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhitshowdramaperformancecomedymusical
play
 indoors You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 on mobile or computer

On the hand I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhitshowdramaperformancecomedymusical
play
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 out of door in the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 gardens to become physically
 fit. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 them to become active toward whole day work. For instance
 a study taken by health club who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 that 99percent ch of outdoor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 them to become physically
 and mentally Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphfit.fit!fit?fit:fit,fit;
fit