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Increasing the price of petrol is best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problem. To what extent do you agree and disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Increasing the price of petrol is best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problem. What other measures do you think might be effective? L0oR
It correctly said that that Earth is a legacy we should preserve it to pass on to the next generation. Inclining in the price of fossil fuel is the better approach to eliminate up lifting traffic and pollution problems. The upcoming paragraphs will discuss this point of view and also the other system to control these problems. To commence with, nowadays traffic congestion and pollution have become main concern for people. If government will increase price of petrol automatically travelling one place to another become expensive and which is maximum mankind's do not afford that community cost and the will start to use public Vehicles more rather than their personal transport modes. As a result somehow traffic pollution and accident problems will be reduce. On the other hand, there are number of other ways might be effective for this serious issues. First and foremost, path to eradicate these difficulties will use of eco friendly means of travelling. For example, bicycles, cng and electric vehicles etc. Moving ahead, authorities should set limitations and regulations to buying personal vehicles. For instance, in a family only one car and one two wheelers should be allow and automatically it will help to decline traffic issues on road. Furthermore, government must be arrange car pooling system in over polluted areas and this method might be application based people can search vehicles for their destination and share the cab and expenses also. In addition to this, administration must be work on odd and even method to minimize traffic was and pollution trouble. To substantiate, in Delhi this measure implemented which was really effective to overcome these problems. To concluded, A flower cannot make a garden similarly only rise of prices can not Huristics these problems single handling, while other measures are also equally important.
It
correctly
said that that Earth is a legacy we should preserve it to pass on to the
next
generation. Inclining in the price of fossil fuel is the better approach to eliminate up lifting
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traffic
and
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pollution
problems. The upcoming paragraphs will discuss this point of view and
also
the
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other
system to control these problems.

To commence with, nowadays
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traffic
congestion and
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pollution
have become main concern for
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people
. If
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government
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will increase
price of petrol
automatically
travelling one place to another become expensive and which is maximum mankind's do not afford that community cost and
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the
will
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start
to
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use
public
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Vehicles
more
rather
than their personal transport modes.
As a result
somehow
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traffic
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pollution
and accident problems will be
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reduce
.

On the
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other
hand, there are number of
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other
ways might be effective for this serious issues.
First
and foremost, path to eradicate these difficulties will
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use
of
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
eco friendly
means of travelling.
For example
, bicycles,
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cng
and electric
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vehicles
etc. Moving ahead, authorities should set limitations and regulations to buying personal
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vehicles
.
For instance
, in a family
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only
one car and one
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two wheelers
should be
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allow
and
automatically
it will
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help
to decline
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traffic
issues on road.
Furthermore
,
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government
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must
be
Consider using the past participle "arranged"?
arrange
car pooling system in over polluted areas and this method might be application based
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people
can search
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vehicles
for their destination and share the cab and expenses
also
.
In addition
to this, administration
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must
be work on odd and even method to minimize
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traffic
was and
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pollution
trouble. To substantiate, in Delhi this measure implemented which was
really
effective to overcome these problems.

To concluded, A flower cannot
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make
a garden
similarly
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only
rise of prices can not
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Huristics
these problems single handling, while
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other
measures are
also
equally
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important
.
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IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problem. What other measures do you think might be effective?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
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