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Farmers within a country are often protected by traiffs that is special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary and should be implemented wherever possible

Farmers within a country are often protected by traiffs that is special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary and should be implemented wherever possible pYRL
Agricultural sector is the back bone of a country. Even, matority of organizations are rely on it. Therefore, farmers are free from all taxes but the government impose levy in imported food. I agree with this statement such kind of policies should apply on imported goods in possible ways. This essay will explain my viewpoints regarding this statement in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, protecting farmers from traiffs there are many merits of it. First and foremost, it helps to encourage people to do more farming because the producers will enjoy hight profit as no tax on their products. Moreover, if there is no charge on farming practices then it would interact more individuals towards agriculture. As a result, the unemployment rate may decline.
Agricultural sector is the back bone of a country. Even,
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matority
of organizations are
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on it.
Therefore
, farmers are free from all taxes
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but
the
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government
impose levy in imported food. I
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agree
with this statement such kind of policies should apply on imported
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goods
in possible ways. This essay will
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explain
my viewpoints regarding this statement in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, protecting farmers from
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traiffs
there are
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many
merits of it.
First
and foremost, it
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helps
to encourage
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to do more farming
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because
the producers will enjoy
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hight
profit as no tax on their products.
Moreover
, if there is no charge on farming practices then it would interact more individuals towards agriculture.
As a result
, the unemployment rate may decline.
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IELTS essay Farmers within a country are often protected by traiffs that is special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary and should be implemented wherever possible

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
124 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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