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Increasing the price of petrol

Increasing the price of petrol 7g16

Traffic congestion and pollution are two major issues worldwide. It is possible that traffic and pollution can be controlled by increasing petrol price. However, I feel that the other measures are more effective. If the petrol price increases less people will be able to afford it for example many people use transport in daily basis and if the cost petrol increases the cost of other commodities will also increase the will directly affect the economy. There are many better measures that can be taken in order to reduce traffic that is by improving public transport, setting up traffic lights and also by encouraging public to use public transports instead of cars this will not only reduce the traffic but also the pollution level in the environment.

You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
Traffic
 congestion and pollution are two major issues worldwide. It is possible that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
 and pollution can be controlled
 by increasing petrol price. However
, I feel that the other measures are more effective. If the petrol price increases Did you mean "fewer"? The noun people is countable.fewer
less
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 will be able to afford it for example
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 transport in daily basis and if the cost petrol increases the cost of other commodities will also
 increase Did you mean "they", "that" or "there"?theythatthere
the
 will directly
 affect the economy. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 better measures that can be taken
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
that is
 by improving public transport, setting up You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
 lights and also
 by encouraging public to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 public transports instead
 of cars this will not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 the pollution level in the environment. 