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Increasing the price of petrol

Increasing the price of petrol 7g16
Traffic congestion and pollution are two major issues worldwide. It is possible that traffic and pollution can be controlled by increasing petrol price. However, I feel that the other measures are more effective. If the petrol price increases less people will be able to afford it for example many people use transport in daily basis and if the cost petrol increases the cost of other commodities will also increase the will directly affect the economy. There are many better measures that can be taken in order to reduce traffic that is by improving public transport, setting up traffic lights and also by encouraging public to use public transports instead of cars this will not only reduce the traffic but also the pollution level in the environment.
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congestion and pollution are two major issues worldwide. It is possible that
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traffic
and pollution can
be controlled
by increasing petrol price.
However
, I feel that the other measures are more effective. If the petrol price increases
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less
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people
will be able to afford it
for example
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many
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people
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use
transport in daily basis and if the cost petrol increases the cost of other commodities will
also
increase
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the
will
directly
affect the economy. There are
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many
better measures that can
be taken
in order to
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reduce
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traffic
that is
by improving public transport, setting up
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traffic
lights and
also
by encouraging public to
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use
public transports
instead
of cars this will not
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only
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reduce
the
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but
also
the pollution level in the environment.

IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
126 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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