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Increasing housing problem can be solved by the government.my opinion on that.

Increasing housing problem can be solved by the government. my opinion on that. jVemX
Population density has constantly increased over the last 10 years. This led to a rise in housing problems as many people are left with no place to stay and are forced to overcrowd in one particular location. For instance at kayole in Nairobi city, slams are the common housing available exposing them to high chances of air pollution and theft. By the help of the government in controlling the house development, pollution and so on the housing problem may be controlled.
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IELTS essay Increasing housing problem can be solved by the government. my opinion on that.

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