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Chevening is looking for individuals who have a clear post-study career plan. Please outline your immediate plans upon returning home and your longer term career goals. You may wish to consider how these relate to what the UK government is doing in your country.

Chevening is looking for individuals who have a clear post-study career plan. Please outline your immediate plans upon returning home and your longer term career goals. You may wish to consider how these relate to what the UK government is doing in your country. Nw572
I always had a desire to work in a development sector where I can work for marginalized people because it is challenging and impactful for society. I believe that the benefit of higher study is for both individual and societal. My present work is to piloting the Co-created BRAC Play Lab Home-based Daycare model for labor based community. This specific project has two objectives, one is to empower woman entrepreneur and second is to provide daycare facilities for labor based communities. I am mainly focal of the curriculum as well as working as a core team member for project implementation like budgeting, monitoring, reporting. After back to home, I will join in my present work place and will contribute my knowledge for scaling up home based daycare model. Nevertheless, I am also coordinating childcare training and daycare short course designing. The increasing number of female education and working rate indicates the demand of daycare service. But unfortunately this service is not enough; especially for labor based community and quality is not satisfactory. But recently Bangladesh government has approved the Child Daycare Centre Act 2021 and now it’s a valid to ensure the service by following the government instruction. I got an opportunity developing national daycare guideline and this enlarged my experiences in daycare service. As the government has published daycare act so now it is a movement to develop trained daycare professional for ensuring the quality of the services. I can apply my knowledge and skill in this field as well. In the meantime, I will contribute on child focused research. My previous publications were in childhood related topics and in future I want more contribution in this segment. In addition to, I am also keen interested to work for the refugee families and children so I will try to attach with this type of projects in future. According to the Nurturing Care Framework the five components for a child are good health, adequate nutrition, responsive caregiving, security, safety and opportunities for early years’ learning. During working in Education and ECD sector I realized that people are unacquainted about the importance of early years and the importance of play. I experienced that many educated parents are also not have proper knowledge about importance early year development, brain development, responsive caregiving. We have lack of childcare service, play-based learning opportunities, community-based child stimulation program etc. The 17 Sustainable Development Goals are all interconnected and child is the most crucial component to ensure prosperous and sustainable societies. Early year’s investment matters so we have to plan holistically ensuring human capacity enhancement and people’s empowerment. My long term vision is to establish myself as an expert in child development field in national and international level where I will work to promote partnerships and collaborate to create a supportive environment for children. Along this, I will work to address priority areas and development for the new generation. Lastly, my future plan would be possible if I explore the sophisticated educational environment in multi culture context where my experience will be countable and at the same time new dimension or values will be added in my skill.
I always had a desire to
work
in a
development
sector where I can
work
for marginalized
people
because
it is challenging and impactful for society. I believe that the benefit of higher study is for both individual and societal.

My present
work
is
to piloting
the Co-created
BRAC
Play Lab Home-based
Daycare
model for labor based community. This specific project has two objectives, one is to empower woman entrepreneur and second is to provide
daycare
facilities for labor based communities. I am
mainly
focal of the curriculum
as well
as working as a core team member for project implementation like budgeting, monitoring, reporting. After back to home, I will
join
in my present
work
place and will contribute my knowledge for scaling up home based
daycare
model.

Nevertheless
, I am
also
coordinating childcare training and
daycare
short course designing. The increasing number of female education and working rate indicates the demand of
daycare
service
.
But
unfortunately this
service
is not
enough
;
especially
for labor based community and quality is not satisfactory.
But
recently Bangladesh
government
has approved the
Child
Daycare
Centre
Act 2021 and
now
it’s a valid to ensure the
service
by following the
government
instruction. I
got
an opportunity developing national
daycare
guideline and this enlarged my experiences in
daycare
service
. As the
government
has published
daycare
act
so
now
it is a movement to develop trained
daycare
professional for ensuring the quality of the
services
. I can apply my knowledge and
skill
in this field
as well
.

In the meantime, I will contribute on
child
focused research. My previous publications were in childhood related topics and in future I want more contribution in this segment.
In addition
to, I am
also
keen interested to
work
for the refugee families and children
so
I will try to attach with this type of projects
in future
.

According to the Nurturing Care Framework the five components for a
child
are
good
health, adequate nutrition, responsive caregiving, security, safety and opportunities for
early
years’ learning. During working in Education and
ECD
sector I realized that
people
are unacquainted
about the importance of
early
years and the importance of play. I experienced that
many
educated parents are
also
not have proper knowledge about importance
early
year
development
, brain
development
, responsive caregiving. We have lack of childcare
service
, play-based learning opportunities, community-based
child
stimulation program etc. The 17 Sustainable
Development
Goals are all interconnected and
child
is the most crucial component to ensure prosperous and sustainable societies.
Early
year’s
investment matters
so
we
have to
plan
holistically
ensuring human capacity enhancement and
people
’s empowerment. My long term vision is to establish myself as an expert in
child
development
field in national and international level where I will
work
to promote partnerships and collaborate to create a supportive environment for children. Along this, I will
work
to address priority areas and
development
for the new generation.

Lastly
, my future plan would be possible if I explore the sophisticated educational environment in multi culture context where my experience will be countable and at the same time new dimension or values will be
added
in my
skill
.
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IELTS essay Chevening is looking for individuals who have a clear post-study career plan. Please outline your immediate plans upon returning home and your longer term career goals. You may wish to consider how these relate to what the UK government is doing in your country.

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