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Include the following points in your essay: - a definition of a good or bad leader - situations where leadership is necessary - examples of effective leaders

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The controversial topic concerning Public leader and politician people never fails to attract public attention. There has been a heated debate on whether the political party can provide benefits to our society or not. In this essay, I shall elaborate on my point of view by analysing both view sides of the argument before deducing a proper conclusion. First of all, the unprofessional leader is known as when the People elect the candidate of the particular parliament after elect when they did not obey or co-operate with the people and they asking bribe for every contract. For instance, according to the local Newspaper in India 50% of leaders are asking bribe for each contract they signed. Secondly, every organization needs a fabulous leader it can be either the public leader or institute head. The good quality of a leader is providing proper care to trusted and voted people. For instance, In conclusion, due to the aforementioned reasons, we may safely conclude that the positive impacts of the topic far outweigh drawbacks. Therefore, I strongly recommend selecting a good leader will help future for societies to take careful steps to mitigate potential problems.
The controversial topic concerning Public
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leader
and politician
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people
never fails to attract public attention. There has been a heated debate on whether the political party can provide benefits to our society or not. In this essay, I shall elaborate on my point of view by
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analysing
both view sides of the argument
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before
deducing a proper conclusion.

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First of all
, the unprofessional
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leader
is known
as when the
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People
elect the candidate of the particular parliament after elect when they did not obey or co-operate with the
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people and
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they asking
bribe for every contract.
For instance
, according to the local Newspaper in India 50% of
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leaders
are asking bribe for each contract they signed.

Secondly
, every organization needs a fabulous
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leader
it can be either the public
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leader
or institute head. The
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good
quality of a
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leader
is providing proper care to trusted and voted
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people
.
For instance
,

In conclusion
, due to the aforementioned reasons, we may
safely
conclude that the
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positive
impacts of the topic far outweigh drawbacks.
Therefore
, I
strongly
recommend selecting a
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good
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leader
will
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help
future for societies to take careful steps to mitigate potential problems.
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IELTS essay Include the following points in your essay: - a definition of a good or bad leader - situations where leadership is necessary - examples of effective leaders

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
192 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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