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In your opinion, what has been the most significant transportation innovation of the past 200 years?

In your opinion, what has been the most significant transportation innovation of the past 200 years? DmNj
Transportation system has become one of the most crucial parts of a developed country and it is an intrinsic way of living for convenience and ease. Public transportation ways are varied and different around the world and some prefer trains while others like metros. However, from my own standpoint, I think that the best and innovative traveling feature of the past 200 years is the train due to its flexibility of utilization and its economic cost. To begin with, the train is a centerpiece in preponderance of regions, and most of the people in the world \improvement are using the train because it is accessible and fast. Furthermore, there has been a lot of excavations recently in the railway system for the comfort of the public. To cue evidence, most students and employees in United States are traveling by train according to the Transportation organization due to \ because of its high speed. Thus, it is clear that trains are favorable to the public namely the commuters and students Secondly, most train systems are inexpensive and it suits everyone's budget such as students and low-paid workers unlike other types of transferring vehicles like taxis which take double the cost of a train. For instance, when I was in London 2019 I was spending almost 400 £ for\on taxis monthly. However, when I purchased the access card for the train I only spent 195 pounds monthly. This makes it approachable and suitable for many people, especially those with the low-income. To sum up, the transportation system is an epicenter in prosperous countries and there is a wide range of public vehicles around the world. Nevertheless, I think the train is the most accessible type for the last two centuries and is liked by many people for its low\ economical -price and quick movement. \ fast speed and the governments should upgrade / revamp their transportation systems by investing more on trains.
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developed country
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ease
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transportation
ways
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different
around the world and
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some
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trains
while others like metros.
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own
standpoint, I
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think
that the best and innovative traveling feature of the past 200 years is the
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train
due to its flexibility of utilization and its economic cost.

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begin
with, the
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train
is a centerpiece in preponderance of regions, and most of the
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people
in the world \improvement are using the
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train
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because
it is accessible and
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fast
.
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, there has been
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a lot of
excavations recently in the railway
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system
for the comfort of the
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public
. To cue evidence, most students and employees
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in United States
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according to the
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organization due to \
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that
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trains
are favorable to the
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public
namely
the commuters and students

Secondly
, most
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train
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systems
are inexpensive and it suits everyone's budget such as students and low-paid workers unlike other types of transferring vehicles like taxis which take double the cost of a
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train
.
For instance
, when I was in London 2019 I was spending almost
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400 £
for\on taxis monthly.
However
, when I
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purchased
the access card for the
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train
I
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only
spent
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makes
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many
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people
,
especially
those with the low-income.

To sum up, the
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transportation
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system
is an epicenter in prosperous countries and there is a wide range of
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public
vehicles around the world.
Nevertheless
, I
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think
the
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train
is the most accessible type for the last two centuries and
is liked
by
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many
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people
for its low\ economical -price and quick movement. \
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fast
speed and the
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governments
should upgrade / revamp their
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transportation
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systems
by investing more on
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trains
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IELTS essay In your opinion, what has been the most significant transportation innovation of the past 200 years?

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