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In your English class you have been talking about endangered species, animals or plants that will likely become extinct. Your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.

In your English class you have been talking about endangered species, animals or plants that will likely become extinct. Your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. yPENM
Nowadays, some of the people hunt any animals to spend happiness or destroy a lot of plants every where. Whether, bad weather affects them to rise their number. I will explain to give reasons for my point of view. There is no doubt, huntsmen hunt scarse animals to be happy or sell to be rich, in a result, a number of animals are vanishing now. In other words, the most expensive animal is rhinoceros, it has got a horn and it is sold a lot of money. In addition, this animal is created in "RED BOOK" at this time. There is other hand, air pollution is the most important problem and nowadays hot weather is drying the ground that is why there are a lot of factors and increase industry, in a result, some animals and plants are endengering due to bad weather. Because water is not plenty of them and they can not live. According to me, the government strongly punish Hunters to not chase special areas and every where we built large draw-wells to water the plants and animals. After then, we can aspecially save endangered animals and plants to increase a wide range of them.
Nowadays,
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some of the
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people
hunt any
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animals
to spend happiness or
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destroy
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a lot of
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plants
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every where
.
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Whether
,
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bad
weather affects them to rise their number. I will
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explain
to give reasons for my point of view.

There is no doubt, huntsmen hunt
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scarse
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animals
to be happy or sell to be rich, in a result, a number of
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animals
are vanishing
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now
.
In other words
, the most expensive
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animal
is rhinoceros, it has
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got
a horn and it
is sold
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a lot of
money.
In addition
, this
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animal
is created
in
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"
RED BOOK
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"
at this time.

There is other hand, air pollution is the most
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important
problem and nowadays hot weather is drying the ground
that is
why there are
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a lot of
factors and increase industry, in a result,
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some
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animals
and
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plants
are
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endengering
due to
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bad
weather.
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Because
water is not
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plenty
of
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them and
they can not
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live
.

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According to me
, the
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government
strongly
punish Hunters to not chase special areas and
Did you mean "everywhere"?
every where
we built large draw-wells to water the
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plants
and
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animals
. After then, we can
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aspecially
save endangered
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animals
and
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plants
to increase a wide range of them.
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IELTS essay In your English class you have been talking about endangered species, animals or plants that will likely become extinct. Your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
198 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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