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In today's world, pressure of modern life is negatively affecting the family life. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, pressure of modern life is negatively affecting the family life. EEdM

Undoubtedly, modernisation has brought a gigantic revolution in everyone's life. Therefore, the majority of masses are passionate towards adopting the modern lifestyle just because of its vibrant outcomes. However, endulging in modern life has overwhelming detrimental impacts on relationships. I agree with the above statement and will highlight some notions to support my view in impending paragraphs. To commence with, metarialistic approch of younger generation is escalating by leapes and bounds. People try to find happiness in technological tools. Thus, they prefer to spend their quality time with numerous gizmos rather than family members. Consequently, it affects the relationship bonds adversely. Apart from it, privacy as well as freedom are the main priorities among adults. They want to enjoy their life without the interference of anyone. Not only personal secrets but masses also hesitate to share their things with others. For instance, the times of India recently reported that 89% of people who live alone in cities due to maintain their privacy which they want in life. Additionally, new generation lacks in social values, customs, culture etcetera owning to the introduction of modern styles. Hence, they adopt other rituals or virtues which are more convenient without consideration its drawbacks and forget their own. For paradigm, a recent study in 2019 showed that the number of people who were not even aware about their culture was highest incomparison to those who were following it. To conclude, although modernisation could be extremely significant for multitudes to unlock the door of freedom, people should be influenced by it in a limited way so they can save their family life.

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modernisation
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life
. Therefore
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just
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because
 of its vibrant outcomes. However
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endulging
 in modern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 has overwhelming detrimental impacts on relationships. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the above statement and will highlight This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 notions to support my view in impending paragraphs.

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metarialistic
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approch
 of younger generation is escalating by Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "leaps", the plural form of the noun 'leap'?leapsleavesleasesleapedleaperleapers
leapes
 and bounds. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 try to find happiness in technological tools. Thus
, they prefer to spend their quality time with numerous gizmos rather
 than family members. Consequently
, it affects the relationship bonds adversely
. Apart from it, privacy as well
 as freedom are the main priorities among adults. They want to enjoy their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 without the interference of anyone. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 personal secrets This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 masses also
 hesitate to share their things with others. For instance
, If the term is a proper noun, use the suggested capitalization.The Times of India
the times of India
 recently reported that 89% of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 alone in cities due to maintain their privacy which they want in life.

Additionally
, new generation lacks in social values, customs, culture etcetera owning to the introduction of modern styles. Hence
, they adopt other rituals or virtues which are more convenient without consideration its drawbacks and forget their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
. For paradigm, a recent study in 2019 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 that the number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who were not even aware about their culture was highest Possible spelling mistake found.in comparison
incomparison
 to those who were following it.

To conclude
, although Possible spelling mistake. 'modernisation' is British English.modernization
modernisation
 could be extremely
 significant for multitudes to unlock the door of freedom, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 should be influenced
 by it Consider replacing "in a limited way" with the adverb for "limited"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a limited way
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they can save their family You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
. 