Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

In today’s times the internet is making it easier to study online from home. Some people prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinion.

In today’s times the internet is making it easier to study online from home. Some people prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education. BDow
Advent of internet has introduced plenty of positive changes in education methods. Some people believe that online tutorials are effective way to study. However, others hold different opinion and think that there is no replacement of classroom study. This essay will analyze both viewpoints with examples to support the arguments and present my opinion in later. Classroom education is traditional way of teaching. Proponents of this viewpoint believe that there is no comparison of in-class study as one can learn effectively in an interactive session with tutor. Teachers have ample experience and techniques to train the students and under the guidance of a mentor pupils can flourish and enhance their skill set rapidly, which on the other hand would be time-consuming activity If one would learn on its own. To support this argument, healthy group discussions not only brainstorm but leads to the developed logical thinking to look at any problem with different viewpoints, which cannot be achieved by studying alone at home. Nevertheless, there are certain demographics of the society who believe that online courses have their own advantages. Firstly, most of the online tutorials are available free of cost and easily accessible to those who cannot pay high university fees. Thus, a convenient way to educate oneself. Secondly, time flexibility is another important factor and one can learn at one's own pace, that would be really difficult to achieve in classroom study. Lastly, techniques and skill set acquired with self-study are long-lasting. In favour of these statements, famous newspaper 'The Hindu' has published an article on prominent entrepreneurs who were unable to afford university education due to their economic crunch but never gave up and studied themselves with various means such as online free sessions and attained knowledge and educated themselves and later set and example for others. All these facts substantiate the usefulness of online tutorials. By hammering the final nail, I pen down by saying that advantages of online tutorials certainly overweigh the classroom study and self-learnt skills are persistent for lifetime, which on the other hand, would be spoon fed by mentors in lectures.
Advent of internet has introduced
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
in education methods.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
tutorials are
Please check whether an article is missing: "a effective".
effective
way to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
.
However
, others hold
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
opinion and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that there is no replacement of classroom
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
. This essay will analyze both viewpoints with examples to support the arguments and present my opinion in later.

Classroom education is
Please check whether an article is missing: "a traditional".
traditional
way of teaching. Proponents of this viewpoint believe that there is no comparison of in-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
as one can learn
effectively
in an interactive session with tutor. Teachers have ample experience and techniques to train the students and under the guidance of a mentor pupils can flourish and enhance their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
set
rapidly
, which on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand would be time-consuming activity If one would learn on its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
. To support this argument, healthy group discussions not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
brainstorm
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
leads to the developed logical thinking to look at any problem with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
viewpoints, which cannot
be achieved
by studying alone at home.

Nevertheless
, there are certain demographics of the society who believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
courses have their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
advantages.
Firstly
, most of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
tutorials are available free of cost and
easily
accessible to those who cannot pay high university fees.
Thus
, a convenient way to educate oneself.
Secondly
, time flexibility is another
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
factor and one can learn at one's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
pace, that would be
really
difficult to achieve in classroom
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
.
Lastly
, techniques and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
set acquired with self-study are long-lasting. In
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
of these statements,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
newspaper 'The Hindu' has published an article on prominent entrepreneurs who were unable to afford university education due to their economic crunch
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
never gave up and studied themselves with various means such as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
free sessions and attained knowledge and educated themselves and later set and example for others. All these facts substantiate the usefulness of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
tutorials.

By hammering the final nail, I pen down by saying that advantages of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
tutorials
certainly
Possible spelling mistake found.
overweigh
the classroom
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
and
Possible spelling mistake found.
self-learnt
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
are persistent for lifetime, which on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand, would be
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
spoon fed
by mentors in lectures.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay In today’s times the internet is making it easier to study online from home. Some people prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
349 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts