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In this present era, people prefer food items, which have attractive packaging.

In this present era, people prefer food items, which have attractive packaging. 8YAG
In this present era, people prefer food items, which have attractive packaging. Therefore, the waste of food packaging increasing in many nations. This essay will enshrine what is possible causes of it and also give reasonable solutions for it, which described in the following paragraphs. To embarks with, plenty of negative effects of food packets which harms Society. first and foremost, if people take packaging food products and they threw that packaging materials into the garbage, then that place becomes home of mosquitoes, Which spreads various disease such as malaria, dengue, and many more. Moreover, the covering materials most probably made from plastic, that making process creates air pollution, which harms humans, animals, and birds too. For example, 50% of plastic manufactured in the USA, therefore the pollution ratio there is the highest among other countries and people suffering from problems. on the other hand, various steps will reduce the effect of the issues. Firstly, if the government of country made an excellent chain of collecting garbage, then the population of Mosquito reduce, ultimately disease problem will be a decline or vanish. Secondly, authorities have to make a rule for use of plastic bags, which reduce the production of plastics, and the quality of air will increase, which helps humans and other creatures to live peacefully in the world. For instance, the government of India banned plastic bags, therefore air pollution is reduced there. Those are the main possible solution for problems of waste food packaging. To conclude, while waste materials create problems, that can be solved through different steps. The main problem of waste materials are disease and pollution but that will solve by making garbage collecting chain and limited use of plastic.
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people
prefer
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items, which have attractive
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packaging
.
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, the
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waste
of
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food
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packaging
increasing in
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many
nations. This essay will enshrine what is possible causes of it and
also
give reasonable solutions for it, which
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described
in the following paragraphs.

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plenty
of
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negative
effects of
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food
packets which harms Society.
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first
and foremost, if
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people
take
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packaging
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food
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products and
they threw that
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packaging
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materials
into the garbage, then that place becomes home of mosquitoes, Which spreads various disease such as malaria, dengue, and
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many
more.
Moreover
, the covering
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materials
most
probably
made from
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plastic
, that making process creates air
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pollution
, which harms humans, animals, and birds too.
For example
, 50% of
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plastic
manufactured in the USA,
therefore
the
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pollution
ratio there is the highest among other countries and
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people
suffering from problems.

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reduce
the effect of the issues.
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, if the
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government
of country made an excellent chain of collecting garbage, then the population of Mosquito
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reduce
,
ultimately
disease
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problem
will be a decline or vanish.
Secondly
, authorities
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have to
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make
a
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for
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use
of
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plastic
bags, which
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reduce
the production of
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plastics
, and the quality of air will increase, which
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helps
humans and other creatures to
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live
peacefully
in the world.
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, the
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government
of India banned
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plastic
bags,
therefore
air
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pollution
is
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reduced
there. Those are the main possible solution for
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problems
of
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waste
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food
packaging.

To conclude
, while
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create
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, that can
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different
steps. The main
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of
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waste
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materials
are disease and
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pollution
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that will solve by making garbage collecting chain and limited
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use
of
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plastic
.
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IELTS essay In this present era, people prefer food items, which have attractive packaging.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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