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In this present era, learning methods are little changed.

In this present era, learning methods are little changed. NRxq
In this present era, learning methods are little changed. Few people believe that it is valuable for students to went outsides of the school campus, where they can learn practical skills. This essay will enshrine why people think this, and also explain my agreement in the following paragraphs. To embarks with, plenty of benefits, which attracted citizens to think in this way. First and foremost, if students visit companies which is related to the field, they get a reasonable experience of companies, which will help them in the future. Furthermore, visiting local building helps to change the atmosphere of teaching which reduce the stress level in the student’s mind, and they become more creative. for example, schools in Japan frequently organized trips to visiting companies or the building, which creates an impact on students academic result. On the same hand, if schools authorities make a plan for academic your, then that will help to develop a relationship between teachers and students, which make them more friendly, that relationship slove lots of problems which run in the students’ mind and they will create a positive effect on their behaviour as well as result. For instance, more than 70 percentage of toppers have a good relationship with the teachers, it was described in one survey which was conducted by the University of Gujarat in 2018. To conclude, although classroom study is useful, outside study is more beneficial than traditional study. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the statement because travelling is the best instructor which provides experience, to build a strong relationship with teachers, and also change the atmosphere of study.
In this present era, learning methods are
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. Few
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students
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skills
. This essay will enshrine why
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people
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my agreement in the following paragraphs.

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plenty
of benefits, which attracted citizens to
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think
in this way.
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and foremost, if
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students
visit
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companies
which
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to the field, they
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get
a reasonable experience of
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companies
, which will
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help
them in the future.
Furthermore
, visiting local building
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helps
to
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change
the atmosphere of teaching which
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reduce
the
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stress
level in the
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student’s
mind, and they become more creative.
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example, schools in Japan
frequently
organized trips to visiting
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companies
or the building, which creates an impact on
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students
academic result.

On the same hand, if schools authorities
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make
a plan for academic your, then that will
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help
to develop a
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relationship
between teachers and
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students
, which
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make
them more friendly, that
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lots of problems which run in the
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mind and
they will create a
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positive
effect on their
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behaviour
as well
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, more than 70 percentage of toppers have a
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good
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relationship
with the teachers, it was
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described
in one survey which
was conducted
by the University of Gujarat in 2018.

To conclude
, although classroom
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study
is useful, outside
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study
is more beneficial than traditional
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study
. In my opinion, I
strongly
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agree
with the statement
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because
travelling is the best instructor which provides experience, to build a strong
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relationship
with teachers, and
also
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change
the atmosphere of
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study
.
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IELTS essay In this present era, learning methods are little changed.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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