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In this modern epoch, technical gadgets plays a crucial role in children life's. Used a computer on regular basis can have bad than good effects on children.I am partially agree with this notion. I will discuss pont of view in the subsequent crumb of my writing paragraphs.

In this modern epoch, technical gadgets plays a crucial role in children life's. Used a computer on regular basis can have bad than good effects on children. I am partially agree with this notion. I will discuss pont of view in the subsequent crumb of my writing paragraphs. APy2x

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