Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

In these days and ages, since the Coronavirus epidemic is spreading all over the world, social distancing measures are being used to dealing with it. This solution would create certain benefits but there will also be some drawbacks.

In these days and ages, since the Coronavirus epidemic is spreading all over the world, social distancing measures are being used to dealing with it. This solution would create certain benefits, but there will also be some drawbacks. On the one hand, it is clear that social distancing would bring about several advantages. One evident strength is that it would prevent the spread of the disease. In particular, the goal of social distancing is to reduce the contact between infected people and uninfected people in order to minimize the transmission, infection and eventually death. Another benefit is that it would help protect the environment. Because people have to stay at home and do not go outside, there are not any transportation. This will make the environment fresher and greener. On the other hand, there are some obvious disadvantages that would arise. First and foremost, social distancing cripple the economy. Specifically, the restaurants, companies and many stores have to be closed down because of the influence of the disease, which would make the economy undeveloped. Secondly, the unemployment rate is increasing rapidly. This means that residents do not have enough money to live through the disease so that the poverty would be a rise. In conclusion, social distancing has both advantages and disadvantages

In these days and ages, since the Coronavirus epidemic is spreading all over the world, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
 distancing measures are being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to dealing with it. This solution would create certain benefits, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there will also
 be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 drawbacks.

On the one hand, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
 distancing would bring about several advantages. One evident strength is that it would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 the spread of the disease. In particular
, the goal of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
 distancing is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the contact between infected This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and uninfected This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in order to minimize the transmission, infection and eventually
 death. Another benefit is that it would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 protect the environment. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 stay at home and do not go outside, there are not any transportation. This will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the environment fresher and greener.

On the other hand
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 obvious disadvantages that would arise. First
 and foremost, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
 distancing cripple the economy. Specifically
, the restaurants, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 stores This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
be closed
 down This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the influence of the disease, which would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the economy undeveloped. Secondly
, the unemployment rate is increasing rapidly
. This means that residents do not have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 money to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 through the disease This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that the poverty would be a rise.

In conclusion
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
 distancing has both advantages and disadvantages