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In the youth newspaper this morning, there was a passage that said, "For the past few months, the people of Ho Chi Minh City have been straining against the epidemic. Meanwhile, there are some elements who do not like the way the city's leaders fight the epidemic." What do you think about this comment?

In the youth newspaper this morning, there was a passage that said, "For the past few months, the people of Ho Chi Minh City have been straining against the epidemic. Meanwhile, there are some elements who do not like the way the city's leaders fight the epidemic. " What do you think about this comment? gx3ed
For the past few month, the very complicated COVID-19 epidemic in Ho Chi Minh City and many southern areas, a lot of localities have lockdown social Directive 16 of the Goverment. Goverment and city are make sure that help their people together to overcome the epidemic in many ways: managing social distancing, the number of elements going out, helping food for all people and try hard to save the sick person and they top target is the safety of their people. Taking advantage of the above situation, a number of people and organizations have update on the internet a lot of fakenews and false information. When the Government decided to want the distance at a higher level, in fact, they immediately focused on attacking policies, way to help people and control and directing work by the Government, local authorities in an effort to prevent the pandemic. They said all the method of goverment are meaningless and not usefull. In my opinon, these method have been applied by many countries with success and this time is not the right time to blame or don't like the way of the city'lead, i think people who lived in this country need to know of self protection and family, together with the society fight the epidemic to be able to come back normal life as before.
For the past
few month
, the
very
complicated COVID-19 epidemic in Ho Chi Minh City and
many
southern areas,
a lot of
localities have lockdown social Directive 16 of the
Goverment
.

Goverment
and city are
make
sure that
help
their
people
together to overcome the epidemic in
many
ways: managing social distancing, the number of elements going out, helping food for all
people
and try
hard
to save the sick
person and
they top target is the safety of their
people
. Taking advantage of the above situation, a number of
people
and organizations have update on the internet
a lot of
fakenews
and false information. When the
Government
decided to want the distance at a higher level, in fact, they immediately focused on attacking policies, way to
help
people
and control and directing work by the
Government
, local authorities in an effort to
prevent
the pandemic. They said all the method of
goverment
are meaningless and not
usefull
. In my
opinon
,
these method
have
been applied
by
many
countries with success and this time is not the right time to blame or don't like the way of the city'lead,
i
think
people
who
lived
in this country need to know of
self protection
and family, together with the society fight the epidemic to be able to
come
back normal life as
before
.
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IELTS essay In the youth newspaper this morning, there was a passage that said, "For the past few months, the people of Ho Chi Minh City have been straining against the epidemic. Meanwhile, there are some elements who do not like the way the city's leaders fight the epidemic. " What do you think about this comment?

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