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In The United Kingdom, people argument how they can protect historical artifacts, buildings and places. Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how the new guidelines adopted in the United Kingdom helped to address the specific pro

In The United Kingdom, people argument how they can protect historical artifacts, buildings and places. Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how the new guidelines adopted in the United Kingdom helped to address the specific pro 85J9B

In this set of materials, the writer and the lecturer are talking about The United Kingdom history kind of buildings, tool and art products. Accompanying the writer's disclosures, the lecturer explains new guidelines plan giving additonal details and examples about the subject. The details of her speech are summarized in the following paragraphs. The United Kingdom or Britain has significant historical artifacts which include culture and art about old settlement. It has wide range from the Stone Age to Industrial Ages. But now, it is under threat that construction new settlement areas or apartment. According to writer construction projects are caused hazards result. For example, some historical sites destroyed due to the excavation. Although lecturer thinks counter side. She says that construction company has to get permission from archeologists. They examine the excavation area whether it is found valuable artifacts. If they finds, they must do preservation plants. The Government gives more financial support to the preservation archeological sites. Writer says financial support is inadequate. But lecturer gives additional details about this problem. Construction companies should give financial support, if it is found any historical artifacts or tools. On the other hand, Archaeology jobs need solutions related with hiring new job. It is known difficult career way. Writer states that they do not have job opportunity. But lecturer says that companies need expert archaeologists. Because they do plan to preserve new construction areas.

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destroyed
 due to the excavation. Although You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofessorinstructor
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construction
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company
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has to
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get
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, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
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The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 gives more financial support to the preservation archeological sites. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcorrespondentauthorreportercriticcolumnistpoet
Writer
 says financial support is inadequate. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
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lecturer
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details
 about this problem. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentmanufacturesystemplanningplanstructure
Construction
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 should give financial support, if it is found
 any historical artifacts or tools.

On the other hand
, Archaeology jobs need solutions related with hiring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 job. It is known
 difficult career way. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcorrespondentauthorreportercriticcolumnistpoet
Writer
 states that they do not have job opportunity. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
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lecturer
 says that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 need expert archaeologists. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
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construction
 areas. 