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In many countries online shopping is becoming more and more popular. Some people think that this is having a negative impact on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In many countries online shopping is becoming more and more popular. Some people think that this is having a negative impact on society. xmoW6
The popularity of internet purchasing is accelerating with the passage of time in many parts of the world. Nevertheless, it is thought by a number of people that society is dealing with adverse aspects of e-shoping. In my opinion, I flatly contraidicts the render statement due to the fact that online shopping helps to get rid of crowds and also it saves our precious time Firstly, digital shopping is playing an indispensable role when the whole world is struggling with the COVID -19 pandemic. Since maintaining safe distance is one of the main protocol during COVID, electronic shopping is participating immensely in this particular action wherein it has lessen the crowd. As a result, public is obeying rules in the same time fulfilling their wishes owing to virtual shopping. Therefore, there is no harm to society in taking part in e-shopping. Secondly, shopping through internet is acting a profound role in saving our time. The variety on internet for goods and commodities is just inestimable nevertheless, one can choose things of their choices and sometime it become difficult to choose through plethora of varieties. Moreover, users can perform multitasking using this platform. For instance, for a mother with a small baby it is extremely difficult to roam around with baby. So, they can shop from home and take care of their children simultaneously. Along with time one can save money too by discounts on some products. Thereby internet shopping can save time as well as money. Consequently, it is not creating any negative impact on society. To conclude, cyber shopping has helped us a lot in saving time and money. To add more, it is the most convenient form of shopping and also it is safe in the era of COVID-19 pandemic. Also, we should encourage its use and take advantage of this to the fullest
The popularity of internet purchasing is accelerating with the passage of
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time
in
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parts of the world.
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, it is
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thought
by a number of
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people
that society is dealing with adverse aspects of
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e-shoping
. In my opinion, I
flatly
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contraidicts
the render statement due to the fact that online
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shopping
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helps
to
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get
rid of crowds and
also
it saves our precious
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time


Firstly
, digital
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shopping
is playing an indispensable role when the whole world is struggling with the
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
COVID
-19 pandemic. Since maintaining safe distance is one of the main protocol during
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
COVID
, electronic
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shopping
is participating
immensely
in this particular action wherein it has
Use past participle here: "lessened".
lessen
the crowd.
As a result
, public is obeying
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rules
in the same
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time
fulfilling their wishes owing to virtual
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shopping
.
Therefore
, there is no harm to society in taking part in e-shopping.

Secondly
,
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shopping
through internet is acting a profound role in saving our
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time
. The variety on internet for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
and commodities is
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just
inestimable
nevertheless
, one can choose things of their choices and sometime it
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become
difficult to choose through plethora of varieties.
Moreover
, users can perform multitasking using this platform.
For instance
, for a mother with a
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small
baby it is
extremely
difficult to roam around with baby.
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So
, they can shop from home and take care of their children
simultaneously
. Along with
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time
one can save money too by discounts on
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some
products. Thereby internet
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shopping
can save
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time
as well
as money.
Consequently
, it is not creating any
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negative
impact on society.

To conclude
, cyber
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shopping
has
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helped
us a lot in saving
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time
and money. To
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add
more, it is the most convenient form of
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shopping
and
also
it is safe in the era of COVID-19 pandemic.
Also
, we should encourage its
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use
and take advantage of this to the fullest
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IELTS essay In many countries online shopping is becoming more and more popular. Some people think that this is having a negative impact on society.

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  American English
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