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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. g5Ye3
In modern times, written text is losing significance to visual medium for mass communications. In this essay, I will illustrate the factors leading to this phenomenon and then elicit the value of words. There are compelling merits of image-based communications. The main advantage is that visual media such as photograph or video provides captured motions to the evidence seeking society. For instance, news audience can watch visual artifacts for an insight into the evermore complex geopolitical situation in the Middle East. In addition, organizations use meticulously crafted images to convince the consumers of their goods or services through advertisements on various channels such as TV, internet, theatre and so on; the devil is in the details. Furthermore, the current generation prefers to save time from reading and instead watches visual artifacts either online or on television. Therefore, image-based communication vindicates the needs of today’s audience. However, there are pros of written text over visual expressions. First of all, written words have utmost importance in legal medium such as agreements between parties, filing taxes, property ownership documents and so on. Moreover, educational institutions continue to use books or papers to educate the students. For example, engineering graduate candidates study materials consisting of a combination of scientific articles and various textbooks. Finally, words can be used to describe more details than visual communications. For instance, a novel usually provides plethora of information than an adopted movie based on it. Consequently, words have not lost their significance. In conclusion, I firmly believe that image-based communication has an edge overwritten text. Visual artifacts provide evidence, create consumer awareness and saves people’s time from reading. But, written word continues to be used in legal matters, educational institutes and provides abundant information.
In modern times,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
written
text is losing significance to visual medium for mass communications. In this essay, I will illustrate the factors leading to this phenomenon and then elicit the value of words.

There are compelling merits of image-based communications. The main advantage is that visual media such as photograph or video
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
provides
captured motions to the evidence seeking society.
For instance
, news audience can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
visual artifacts for an insight into the evermore complex geopolitical situation in the Middle East.
In addition
, organizations
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
meticulously
crafted images to convince the consumers of their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
or services through advertisements on various channels such as TV, internet,
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theatre
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on; the devil is in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
.
Furthermore
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
generation prefers to save time from reading and
instead
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watches
visual artifacts either online or on television.
Therefore
, image-based
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communication
vindicates the needs of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
’s audience.
However
, there are pros of
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written
text over visual expressions.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
written
words have utmost importance in legal medium such as agreements between parties, filing taxes, property ownership documents and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on.
Moreover
, educational institutions continue to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
books or papers to educate the students.
For example
, engineering graduate candidates study materials consisting of a combination of scientific articles and various textbooks.
Finally
, words can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
describe
more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
than visual communications.
For instance
, a novel
usually
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provides
plethora of information than an adopted movie based on it.
Consequently
, words have not lost their significance.

In conclusion
, I
firmly
believe that image-based
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
has an edge overwritten text. Visual artifacts
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
provide
evidence, create consumer awareness and saves
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
’s time from reading.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
written
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
word
continues to be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in legal matters, educational institutes and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
provides
abundant information.
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IELTS essay In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
286 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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