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In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?

In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? VBK8w
In the last decade, a new era has born which named as Global Internet Era. People can interact and work with others or do their daily activities online thanks to the internet without any real life experience. Although a lot of people oppose with this development because they believe it kills social life experience, this paper moderately supports the digital development due to its affordability. Social life gained a new meaning through years with developing technological devices. It is known that, adapting this brand new social life is difficult for past generations so that they do not prefer to live online and believe that people who are living with internet are introversive ones. However, concerts, festivals, workshops and almost all business meetings are scheduled online in these days because it is easy to attend and people get together easily even less than a minute. To give an example, due to the pandemic, business appointments are scheduling online and Coca Cola announced that, number of people who miss the meetings are reduced 20% compared to last year with this way. People are trying to get rid of transportation and food expenses while working, and with the help of online development, people can save their money from them. Day by day, individuals are realizing that these expenses are much higher than buying technological devices to do their tasks online. To illustrate, I bought a powerful tablet around 2 thousand dollars to be able to do my homework faster and it provides me to save 200 dollars each month because I have no additional expense. In conclusion, while digital purchasing, working, and interaction have a negative way like lack of social life, I support the digital development because of its affordability and high comfort.
In the last decade, a new era has born which named as Global Internet Era.
People
can interact and work with others or do their daily activities
online
thanks to the internet without any real
life
experience. Although
a lot of
people
oppose with this
development
because
they believe it kills social
life
experience, this paper
moderately
supports the digital
development
due to its affordability.

Social
life
gained a new meaning through years with developing technological devices. It
is known
that, adapting this brand new social
life
is difficult for past generations
so
that they do not prefer to
live
online
and believe that
people
who are living with internet are
introversive
ones.
However
, concerts, festivals, workshops and almost all business meetings
are scheduled
online
in these days
because
it is easy to attend and
people
get
together
easily
even less than a minute. To give an example, due to the pandemic, business appointments are scheduling
online
and Coca Cola announced that, number of
people
who miss the meetings are
reduced
20% compared to last year with this way.

People
are trying to
get
rid of transportation and food expenses while working, and with the
help
of
online
development
,
people
can save their money from them. Day by day, individuals
are realizing
that these expenses are much higher than buying technological devices to do their tasks
online
. To illustrate, I
bought
a powerful tablet around 2 thousand dollars to be able to do my homework faster and it provides me to save 200 dollars each month
because
I have no additional expense.

In conclusion
, while digital purchasing, working, and interaction have a
negative
way like lack of social
life
, I support the digital
development
because
of its affordability and high comfort.
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IELTS essay In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion?

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291 words
6.0
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