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In the modern era, more and more individuals tend to secret the history of their homes

In the modern era, more and more individuals tend to secret the history of their homes JqOl0
In the modern era, more and more individuals tend to secret the history of their homes. I think this is because of many reasons: perhaps of interest, or they want to know. In this essay, I will explore what might be the case and how people find it. First and foremost, humans prefer to discover new things and explore the historical background they did not know before. One clear example is that in some movies, it can be easily seen that people tend to be interested in homes that had abnormal activity such as the window automatically open or the book was a drop from the bookshelves by themselves. Secondly, buildings or homes are mysterious on their own, mainly if those are sold and used to be abanded. Some citizens believe spirits can haunt the home if there was built in the cemetery area. Last, knowing about some factors can help individuals avoid choosing to live in a house or apartment. People interested in finding the truth, mysterious about the history of the house can be quickly lookup on the internet which had huge information or ask some older adults who have lived there for an extended period to find the truth. In conclusion, there are many different ways to explain why people are fond of the history of the house or building and more potential approaches to finding out the history.
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IELTS essay In the modern era, more and more individuals tend to secret the history of their homes

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
232 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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