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In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree?

In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. DWn7

Nowadays, people go to malls for both shopping and entertainment. And many people think that in the future, the main reason for going to malls is entertainment. But even so, my opinion is that some shops will survive in malls without being replaced by entertaining facilities. These days, especially in this epidemic time recently, people usually shopping online. For them, malls are more likely a place for entertainment than to shop. There are many means of entertainment you can visit when you go to malls. For example, you can go to the gym, clinic, arcade-game area, cinema, all in one place. I think that shops will not lose their place in malls in the future. Although entertainment facilities will surely increase, malls are still going to have shops and entertainment under one roof.

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people
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malls
 for both shopping and entertainment. And This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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people
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think
 that in the future, the main reason for going to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
malls
 is entertainment. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
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so
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shops
 will survive in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
malls
 without being replaced
 by entertaining facilities.

These days, especially
 in this epidemic time recently, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
usually
 shopping online. For them, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
malls
 are more likely a place for entertainment than to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 means of entertainment you can visit when you go to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
malls
. For example
, you can go to the gym, clinic, arcade-game area, cinema, all in one place.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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shops
 will not lose their place in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
malls
 in the future. Although entertainment facilities will surely
 increase, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
malls
 are still
 going to have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
 and entertainment under one roof. 