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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement? gkQD
Newspaper and books are great source of information and with the advancement in technology, internet provides all kinds of information instantly in limited time. It is believed by some people that in the future books and newspaper will become obsolete and going to be replaced by the online source of information. This essay will discuss why the books will never lost its appeal to readers despite the availability of everything online. There are many positive aspects of books and newspaper which makes them attractive to readers. First of all, There are still many readers who believe in reading books and newspaper while holding them in their hands. Newspaper holds their own significance as it one of the most common morning ritual in people's life. On top of that, there is kind of aesthetic appeal in it which can not be obtained through reading virtually. For instance, People all over the world still like to buy their favorite novels in the form of physical books as many like to collect them for their collections. Books also holds values if they are belongs to some famous writer with the limited edition. On the other hand, Internet provides you the unlimited information without spending single dime for it. Internet can be consider as a big library with access to whole lot of information. It gives to advantage of storing data in your device which can be used later and option to access it from anywhere anytime. Although, Not all the information on internet is always reliable as lots of fake news are observed in recent time. In conclusion, Newspaper and Books will remain in existence for the longer period as lots of people still find them intriguing. Even though, Online books are getting popular among youth.
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books
are great source of
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information
and with the advancement in technology, internet provides all kinds of
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information
instantly
in limited time. It
is believed
by
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some
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people
that in the future
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books
and
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newspaper
will become obsolete and going to
be replaced
by the online source of
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information
. This essay will discuss why the
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books
will never lost its appeal to readers despite the availability of everything online.

There are
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many
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positive
aspects of
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books
and
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newspaper
which
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makes
them attractive to readers.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, There are
still
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many
readers who believe in reading
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books
and
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newspaper
while holding them in their hands.
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Newspaper
holds their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
significance as it one of the most common morning ritual in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's life.
On top of that
, there is kind of aesthetic appeal in it which can not
be obtained
through reading
virtually
.
For instance
,
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People
all over the world
still
like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
their favorite novels in the form of physical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
like to collect them for their collections.
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Books
also
holds values if they are belongs to
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some
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famous
writer with the limited edition.

On the other hand
, Internet provides you the unlimited
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information
without spending single dime for it. Internet can be
Consider using the past participle "considered"?
consider
as a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
library with access to
Consider using "lot".
whole lot
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
. It gives to advantage of storing data in your device which can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
later and option to access it from anywhere anytime.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, Not all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
on internet is always reliable as lots of fake news
are observed
in recent time.

In conclusion
,
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Newspaper
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Books
will remain in existence for the longer period as lots of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
still
find them intriguing.
Even though
, Online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
are getting popular among youth.
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IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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