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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In 21st century, people are connecting with technology for their daily needs. In some near years people will read everything on internet so they do not have to buy newspapers or books. I am patially agreed with the statement. This essay will discuss on both topic. Nowadays, people consider technology and internet as their basic needs, and undoubtedly, there are sne changes shows in people because of internet. So people tend to watch news on internet instead of newspapers. Firstly, today most of the people have internet connection on their gadgets, so they think why should they give money for buying books, magazines, and newspapers. In Covid-19 situation people afraid of touching and using these such things so they avoid to read books and newspapers. Secondly, in books or newspapers have limit information, for variety of topics they have to buy different books, one book or a newspaper can not cover all types of information and knowledge. However, internet has not any boundaries and limit for information, people can read any information they want, any time, with just one click. On the other hand, firstly, there are a number of people who depend on books and newspaper related business. For instance press reporters, cameramen, drivers, and vendors. If people do not buy books and newspapers their business would shot down. Furthermore, internet has enormous knowledge while books and newspapers have category wise information, so people can decide what information they have to read. A recent report said that people can not read anything in internet more than 10 minutes, other wise, it would be harm for their eyes, neck, thumb, and spinal cord. While books and newspapers do not affect to much with body and person can read as much as they want. To add more, not all informations on internet is free, for some information they have to pay some money. To put it in a nutshell, there might be some things that replaced by internet, but i strongly believe that books and newspapers will never replace because of internet.
In 21st century,
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people
are connecting with technology for their daily needs. In
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some
near years
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people
will
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read
everything on internet
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so
they do not
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have to
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buy
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newspapers
or
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books
. I am
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patially
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agreed
with the statement. This essay will discuss on both topic.

Nowadays,
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people
consider technology and internet as their basic needs, and
undoubtedly
, there are
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changes
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shows
in
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people
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because
of internet.
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So
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people
tend to
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watch
news on internet
instead
of
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newspapers
.
Firstly
,
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today
most of the
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people
have internet connection on their gadgets,
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so
they
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think
why should they give money for buying
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books
, magazines, and
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newspapers
. In Covid-19 situation
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people
afraid of touching and using these such things
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so
they avoid to
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read
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books
and
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newspapers
.
Secondly
, in
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books
or
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newspapers
have limit
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information
, for variety of topics they
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have to
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buy
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different
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books
, one
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book
or a
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newspaper
can not cover all types of
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information
and knowledge.
However
, internet has not any boundaries and limit for
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information
,
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people
can
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read
any
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information
they want, any time, with
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just
one click.

On the other hand
,
firstly
, there are a number of
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people
who depend on
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books
and
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newspaper
related business.
For instance
press reporters, cameramen, drivers, and vendors. If
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people
do not
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buy
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books
and
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newspapers
their business would
The modal verb ‘would’ requires the verb’s base form.
shot
down.
Furthermore
, internet has enormous knowledge while
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books
and
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newspapers
have category wise
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information
,
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so
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people
can decide what
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information
they
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have to
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read
. A recent report said that
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people
can not
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read
anything in internet more than 10 minutes,
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other wise
, it would be
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harm
for their eyes, neck, thumb, and spinal cord. While
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books
and
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newspapers
do not affect
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to
much with body and person can
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read
as much as they want. To
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add
more, not all
The word ‘informations’ is a legal term. In standard English, the word ‘information’ is a non-count noun.
informations
on internet is free, for
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some
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information
they
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have to
pay
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some
money.

To put it in a nutshell, there might be
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some
things that replaced by internet,
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but
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i
strongly
believe that
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books
and
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newspapers
will never replace
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because
of internet.
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IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
341 words
5.5
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