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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Owing to the development of internet and social media, lots of advertisements has become a common strategy that provides businesses the channel to promote its commodities and demonstrate its products. However, it is widely argued that consumers can successfully be convinced by advertisements of purchasing goods, others still believe that the effectiveness of advertising has gradually declined, and advertising is unlikely to persuade people to buy things which businesses recommend. This essay will discuss why I suggest that advertising still achieve their desired effect, while people have developed habits to ignore it. First and the foremost, the pervasion of advertising toward consumers has increased dramatically that completely changes our shopping habits and the willingness to various advertisements. Users rarely click on or even glance at a website’s combination of pop-up ads, banners, mailing list requests, and auto-playing video ads. These have become so common that consumers have developed the unconscious practice of skipping ads on YouTube, quickly closing pop-ups and scrolling past in-page advertising because individuals can avoid ads. However, despite most people ignore most ads most of the time. Advertisers insist that advertising is the major source of earnings for multinational enterprises or business, and they have to spend its marketing budgets for advertising. Take Facebook and Google for example, which are the largest companies, attempt to find consumers’ flavour and taste through data analysis and software algorithm in order to find the efficient advertising solutions. Advertising today, in reality, is far more effective than any point in the past because it can target potential consumers and receive solid feedback from internet ads. To sum up, advertising is totally different than the past and its format also transforms to be consisted with consumers’ willingness. I do believe that advertising still can expresses some sort of incentives because it has been adjusted to explore what people want.
Owing to the development of internet and social media, lots of advertisements has become a common strategy that provides businesses the channel to promote its commodities and demonstrate its products.
However
, it is
widely
argued that
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consumers
can
successfully
be convinced
by advertisements of purchasing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
, others
still
believe that the effectiveness of advertising has
gradually
declined, and advertising is unlikely to persuade
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people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
things which businesses recommend. This essay will discuss why I suggest that advertising
still
achieve their desired effect, while
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
have developed habits to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ignore
it.

First
and the foremost, the
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pervasion
of advertising toward
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
consumers
has increased
dramatically
that completely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
our shopping habits and the willingness to various advertisements. Users rarely click on or even glance at a website’s combination of pop-up ads, banners, mailing list requests, and auto-playing video ads. These have become
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
common that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
consumers
have developed the unconscious practice of skipping ads on YouTube,
quickly
closing pop-ups and scrolling past in-page advertising
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
individuals can avoid ads.

However
, despite most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ignore
most ads most of the time. Advertisers insist that advertising is the major source of earnings for multinational enterprises or business, and they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
spend its marketing budgets for advertising. Take Facebook and Google
for example
, which are the largest
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
, attempt to find
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consumers’
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flavour
and taste through data analysis and software algorithm in order to find the efficient advertising solutions. Advertising
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
, in reality, is far more effective than any point in the past
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it can target potential
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
consumers
and receive solid feedback from internet ads.

To sum up, advertising is
totally
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
Did you mean 'different "from"? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
than
the past and its format
also
transforms to
be consisted
with
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consumers’
willingness. I do believe that advertising
still
can
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "express"
expresses
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
sort of incentives
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it has
been adjusted
to explore what
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
want.
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IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want without paying. with this statement.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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