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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement? EWWb
some people believe that as technology is accelerating, almost everything will be available on internet without any charge hence people will stop purchasing physical newspaper or books. I completely agree with this. The popularity of traditional newspapers and books is rapidly decreasing because every newspaper is available online free of cost. The Hindu, for instance, is a prominent daily in India, offers about 60 articles in a day with dynamic range from politics, sports, lifestyle, travel to education and so on to choose from and read virtually without charging a penny. Thus buying newspaper appears futile. In addition to this, the convenience of reading on a device is a major factor. Individuals can read just at the just the click of a button on phone or tablet irrespective of the location they are in. whether one is in the office or on a bus, books are convenient to read digitally. Also, the access to the books is easily available online with huge variety and higher quality. Furthermore, this can be present in the form of audio books which further reduces the effort of reading. Audible, for example, is on such application that offers audio of books free of cost. Online resources are free of charge because the websites, applications generate revenue through advertisements. Hence it is win-win situation for readers as well as websites. In conclusion, I absolutely agree that public will stop buying physical books as convenience, availability and access is virtually almost effortless.
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some
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people
believe that as technology is accelerating, almost everything will be available on internet without any charge
hence
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people
will
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stop
purchasing physical
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newspaper
or
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books
. I completely
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agree
with this.

The popularity of traditional
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newspapers
and
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books
is
rapidly
decreasing
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because
every
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newspaper
is available online free of cost. The Hindu,
for instance
, is a prominent daily in India, offers about 60 articles in a day with dynamic range from politics, sports, lifestyle, travel to education and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on to choose from and read
virtually
without charging a penny.
Thus
buying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspaper
appears futile.
In addition
to this, the convenience of reading on a device is a major factor. Individuals can read
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
at the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
the click of a button on phone or tablet irrespective of the location they are in. whether one is in the office or on a bus,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
are convenient to read
digitally
.
Also
, the access to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
is
easily
available online with huge variety and higher quality.
Furthermore
, this can be present in the form of audio
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
which
further
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reduces
the effort of reading. Audible,
for example
, is on such application that offers audio of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
Possible agreement error. Did you mean "frees"? (Some collective nouns can be treated as both singular and plural, so 'free' is not always incorrect.)
free
of cost.

Online resources are free of charge
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because
the websites, applications generate revenue through advertisements.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Hence
it
Please check whether an article is missing: "is a win-win" or "is an win-win"
is win-win
situation for readers
as well
as websites.

In conclusion
, I
absolutely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that public will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
buying physical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
as convenience, availability and access is
virtually
almost effortless.

IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement?

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245 words
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