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In the future, nobody will buy newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

On present day, many people think that, they will prefer to books and newspaper for reading and buying from the internet without any payment in the future. From my point of view, I am not agree to this statement a large extent for some reasons. My inclination is justified in the forthcoming paragraphs. Out of all the argument the strongest one to prove my view is, Even today, many rural people have neither latest mobile phones or not good qualities of internet, hence, they like to choose of books and newspaper in hard copy. Moreover, mostly senior citizens feel to difficulty on internet and not have good knowledge about technology and website so that, they elect to paper copy rather than online. For instance, In 2014, Indian government was doing survey about "Times of India" newspaper, 58% indian people were reading the press paper and 42℅ people were reading newspaper on the internet. on the other hand, more uses of computer and electronic phone so it affected our health and maybe eye spectacles also come in the future. Moreover, Tabloids and books are published by an authorized author or publishing company, while on the other side and last but not least, a lot of information in the internet is not true and people are copy and paste on other pages for the main purpose of earn money. To conclude and it can be said that young generation may be more prefer to online books material and newspaper because advance technology more accessible and anytime read.
On present day,
many
people
think
that, they will prefer to
books
and
newspaper
for reading and buying from the internet without any payment in the future. From my point of view, I am not
agree
to this statement a large extent for
some
reasons. My inclination
is justified
in the forthcoming paragraphs. Out of all the argument the strongest one to prove my view is, Even
today
,
many
rural
people
have neither latest mobile phones
or
not
good
qualities of internet,
hence
, they like to choose of
books
and
newspaper
in
hard
copy.
Moreover
,
mostly
senior citizens feel to difficulty on internet and not have
good
knowledge about technology and website
so
that, they elect to paper copy
rather
than online.
For instance
, In 2014, Indian
government
was doing survey about
"
Times of India
"
newspaper
, 58%
indian
people
were reading the press paper and 42℅
people
were reading
newspaper
on the internet.
on
the other hand, more
uses
of computer and electronic phone
so
it
affected
our health and maybe eye spectacles
also
come
in the future.
Moreover
, Tabloids and
books
are published
by an authorized author or publishing
company
, while on the other side and last
but
not least,
a lot of
information
in the internet
is not true and
people
are copy and paste on other pages for the main purpose of earn money. To
conclude and
it can
be said
that young generation may be more prefer to online
books
material and
newspaper
because
advance technology more accessible and anytime read.
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IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
255 words
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