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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

On one hand, some folks think that it is nice to have companions who contradict with their opinions while on the other hand, some guys think that it is better to have friends who have similar opinions. I think it is better to have friends who share similar interests and opinions. When in a circle of friends people gather from different backgrounds having various beliefs they can debate about a topic about which they don’t share the same opinion. It will help all folks of a group to expand their knowledge and discuss a point from different angles. Some people might change their point of view due to a constructive discussion. For instance, if one person supports PTI and his friends support PMLN, then everybody can debate about both the parties, share their point of view, and discuss the performance of both parties instead of just one. If you and your friends have same beliefs and opinions, then there are less chances of heated debates. You can enjoy and discuss a particular matter in a friendly way, without developing feelings of grudge towards anyone. You can learn new positive things about a place or a sport. For example, if you support the same football team let’s say Barcelona, then you can celebrate their victories together, and discuss the strengths of each player in the team. To conclude, when people have similar interests they are more comfortable discussing them with their friends, whereas, when folks have different opinions they learn new things and expand their current knowledge.
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that it is nice to have companions who contradict with their
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guys
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friends
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opinions
. I
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it is better to have
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friends
who share similar interests and opinions.

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in a circle of
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friends
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people
gather from
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different
backgrounds having various beliefs they can debate about a topic about which they don’t share the same
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opinion
. It will
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help
all folks of a group to expand their knowledge and
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discuss
a point from
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different
angles.
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Some
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people
might
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change
their point of view due to a constructive discussion.
For instance
, if one person supports PTI and his
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friends
support
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PMLN
, then everybody can debate about both the parties, share their point of view, and
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discuss
the performance of both parties
instead
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If you and your
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have same beliefs and
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opinions
, then there are
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less
chances of heated debates. You can enjoy and
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discuss
a particular matter in a friendly way, without developing feelings of grudge towards anyone. You can learn new
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positive
things about a place or a sport.
For example
, if you support the same football team
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let
’s say Barcelona, then you can celebrate their victories together, and
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discuss
the strengths of each player in the team.

To conclude
, when
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people
have similar interests they are more comfortable discussing them with their
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friends
, whereas, when folks have
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different
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opinions
they learn new things and expand their
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current
knowledge.
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IELTS essay Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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