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Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environment leads important part for our planet. A few individuals believe that today's generation ought to take responsible steps to save the environment for the upcoming generation. This essay agrees with that it is necessary to take actions like do more and more plantation and use the electric vehicles. To begin with, The implementation of new trees in our daily life produced greater impact on environment conditions. In our day to day life everyone should take obligation for planting and growing the trees. If they grows plants, lesser threat to pollution issues. For Instance, As per report concluded that in Denmark it is complusary for everyone to bow the trees during own birthday. So, which makes the weather good and clear. Hence, It is essential to do regularly work like planting because it is important for society and future generations too. In addition to it, It is also pivotal to use electric vehicles. This is to say that they can less threaten for environment. It also shown that cars which runs by electric are provide safer and fast journey. Moreover, compare to vehicles which used fossil fuels has more effect on temperatures risen. It is found that these steps will significant for new generations so they would live better. For Example, As per Newspaper of USA(United States of America) reported that Tesla becomes largest company which has production and manufacturing of electric cars that reduced one third of pollution. Henceforth, It is also one of the important decision to take steps and which helps for latter generations. In conclusion, It is observed that nowadays people have to take actions for protection of environment by doing several methods like growing trees and using non fuel usable machines. This will make superior and safer for future generations.
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today
's generation ought to take responsible steps to save the
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for the upcoming generation. This essay
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agrees
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use
the
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electric
vehicles.

To
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with, The implementation of new
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trees
in our daily life produced greater impact on
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environment
conditions. In our
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day to day
life everyone should take obligation for planting and growing the
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trees
. If they
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grows
plants, lesser threat to pollution issues.
For Instance
, As per report concluded that in Denmark it is
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complusary
for everyone to bow the
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trees
during
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own
birthday.
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the weather
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and
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.
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regularly
work like planting
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important
for society and future generations too.

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use
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electric
vehicles. This is to say that they can less threaten for
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environment
. It
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also shown
that cars which runs by
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electric
are provide safer and
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fast
journey.
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, compare to vehicles which
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used
fossil fuels has more effect on temperatures risen. It
is found
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live
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largest
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company
which has production and manufacturing of
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electric
cars that
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reduced
one third of pollution. Henceforth, It is
also
one of the
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important
decision to take steps and which
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helps
for latter generations.

In conclusion
, It
is observed
that nowadays
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people
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have to
take actions for protection of
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environment
by doing several methods like growing
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trees
and using non fuel usable machines. This will
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make
superior and safer for future generations.
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IELTS essay Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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