Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

In the future, noboday will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

It is said that future world will be online based while everybody might read newspapers or necessary books online totally free of cost. I, personally, with a high degree agree with the statement. On the one hand, there are a clear advantage to read the current news regarding all over the world that is impossible for the paper based newspapers. Now we are able to keep us up to date by the grace of online news sources and it will become more faster in future. For example, even in the village people are using smart devices to read news and necessary books from the free sources at present which was unbelievable earlier and we will see the increase in future. It will be a worth mention that people are getting news without any cost that is a great save for the mass citizens. Thus, we would get better chances to get a more educated society in the future. On the other hand, it is also helping us to keep the nature clean because at the time of producing paper it is required a notable amount of energy and natural resources as well as it creates wastes afterwards. So, online based news sources helping the a lot from the environmental perspective. Finally, online news sources has a great advanges that readers does not need to take the paper with them while some people think papers and books as burden to carry and they do not like it. However, online sources are providing the opportunity to peopleto learn it wherever and whenever they want. In conclusion, I would love to say that online based learning is a great source of learning that is open for everyone in the society. The main advantages what are mass people are taking and will take in the future that it is a free source of information. I am supporting this view for it’s mass use.
It
is said
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
world will be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
based while everybody might read newspapers or necessary books
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
totally
free of cost. I,
personally
, with a high degree
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with the statement.

On the one hand, there are a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
advantage to read the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
regarding all over the world
that is
impossible for the paper based newspapers.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
we are able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
us up to date by the grace of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
sources and
it will become
Use only “faster” (without ‘more’) when you use the comparative.
more faster
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
.
For example
, even in the village
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are using smart devices to read
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
and necessary books from the free
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sources
at present which was unbelievable
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
earlier and
we will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the increase in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
. It will be a worth mention that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are getting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
without any cost
that is
a great save for the mass citizens.
Thus
, we would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
better chances to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a more educated society in the future.

On the other hand
, it is
also
helping us to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the nature clean
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
at the time of producing paper it
is required
a notable amount of energy and natural resources
as well
as it creates wastes afterwards.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
based
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sources
helping
Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only “the” or “a” is left.
the a
lot from the environmental perspective.
Finally
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sources
has a great
Possible spelling mistake found.
advanges
that readers does not need to take the paper with them while
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
papers and books as burden to
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
carry and
they do not like it.
However
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sources
are providing the opportunity to
Possible spelling mistake found.
peopleto
learn it wherever and whenever they want.

In conclusion
, I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to say that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
based learning is a great
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
source
of learning
that is
open for everyone in the society. The main advantages what are mass
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are taking and will take in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
that it is a free
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
source
of information. I am supporting this view for
It seems that the possessive pronoun “its” fits better in this context.
it’s
mass
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay In the future, noboday will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts