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Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the changing world, invention of new tecnology, games are more incresing with good quality and better exprience. Papents think that games has less educatnal value and more harmful for child. I strongly agree with this statement and i will explain it below. As we compare to 19th century, today in mordern era games industry are devloped huge. childer of 5 and above have their own phone and tablets, they play games in their lesiure time also watching live strems of famous gamers. Watching live strem encorage them to play and compete with friend. many student plat games hours and hours this harm their eyes and dangerous for health. To explain this point i would like to give you example, using phone before sleep time can cause lack of sleep, child may suffer with insomania. Other disagvantage are it affect to their education. in app store there are many games that are adictive. To illustrate, popular game pubg many juvelian spent there whoile day playing with friend, this waste time and energy of child by there visual graphics also this game is about kill enemy with guns children may practice this in real. goverment should thake action and put some regulation this type of game and set minimum age crytoriya. To sum up, parent are right to the concern. goverment should take some action toward this typew of games. playing games may affect their studies and student may end up by failing in exam.
In the changing world, invention of new
tecnology
,
games
are more
incresing
with
good
quality and better
exprience
.
Papents
think
that
games
has less
educatnal
value and more harmful for child. I
strongly
agree
with this statement and
i
will
explain
it below.

As we compare to 19th century,
today
in
mordern
era
games
industry are
devloped
huge.
childer
of 5 and above have their
own
phone and tablets, they play
games
in their
lesiure
time
also
watching
live
strems
of
famous
gamers. Watching
live
strem
encorage
them to play and compete with friend.
many
student plat
games
hours and hours this harm their eyes and
dangerous
for health. To
explain
this point
i
would like to give you example, using phone
before
sleep time can cause lack of sleep, child may suffer with
insomania
.

Other
disagvantage
are it affect to their education.
in
app store there are
many
games
that are
adictive
. To illustrate, popular game
pubg
many
juvelian
spent there
whoile
day playing with friend, this waste time and energy of child by there visual graphics
also
this game is about kill enemy with guns children may practice this in real.
goverment
should
thake
action and put
some
regulation this type of game and set minimum age
crytoriya
.

To sum up, parent are right to the concern.
goverment
should take
some
action toward this
typew
of
games
.
playing
games
may affect their studies and student may
end
up by failing in exam.
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IELTS essay Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children.

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