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In the future many people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday . Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the future many people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. 20bM
Holidays are the best time of the year, as it opens up an opportunity to leave the hurdles of life to enjoy peace and quiet. It is opined that a lot of people will prefer to do a staycation rather than a vacation in the coming years. This essay will show to extent to which I agree to this statement. You do not need to travel hundreds of kilometres to enjoy yourself. Innovation has made it easy for one to enjoy an expensive vacation in his own country and that is called a staycation. A staycation is a holiday spent in one's home country rather than abroad. This has proved to be cheaper but promises the same satisfied feeling a vacation will bring. In 2017, I decided a staycation with friends, and it was the best time of our lives. We spent the entire summer on a road trip round the western states in Nigeria, and we saw places that has never be shown on the media. A staycation will be feasible for a lot of individuals in the future, because of the current epidemic that has caused the whole world to pause. This is because people are frightened at the havoc Covid-19 caused, and how much it prompted them to take a whole different turn in their lives. A typical example is when I travelled to London last valentine to partake in the famous tourist attraction. The trip was planned to span 3 months but was cut short due to the shocking wave to the coronavirus epidemic. In conclusion, a staycation has proved to be better for our pockets and acquisition of local knowledge rather than a vacation. Even though most people prefer travelling out of the country but I vehemently agree to staying back home during the holidays.
Holidays are the best time of the year, as it opens up an opportunity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
the hurdles of life to enjoy peace and quiet. It
is opined
that
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a lot of
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people
will prefer to do a
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staycation
rather
than a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacation
in the coming years. This essay will
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show
to extent to which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
to this statement.

You do not need to travel hundreds of
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kilometres
to enjoy yourself. Innovation has made it easy for one to enjoy an expensive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacation
in his
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own
country and that
is called
a
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staycation
. A
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staycation
is a holiday spent in one's home country
rather
than abroad. This has proved to be cheaper
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
promises the same satisfied feeling a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacation
will bring. In 2017, I decided a
Possible spelling mistake found.
staycation
with friends, and it was the best time of our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
. We spent the entire summer on a road trip round the western states in Nigeria, and we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
places that has never
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be
shown on the media.

A
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staycation
will be feasible for
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a lot of
individuals in the future,
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because
of the
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current
epidemic that has caused the whole world to pause. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are frightened
at the havoc Covid-19 caused, and how much it prompted them to take a whole
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
turn in their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
. A typical example is when I travelled to London last valentine to partake in the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
tourist attraction. The trip
was planned
to span 3 months
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but
was
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cut
short due to the shocking wave to the coronavirus epidemic.

In conclusion
, a
Possible spelling mistake found.
staycation
has proved to be better for our pockets and acquisition of local knowledge
rather
than a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacation
.
Even though
most
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
prefer travelling out of the country
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I
vehemently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
to staying back home during the holidays.
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IELTS essay In the future many people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
300 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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