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In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. with this statement? W1Ra
Sure, in the future survive on the earth will be difficult for various reasons. Due to the fact peoplesruin and destroy all on the world. Because of this government highlights much money for exploring and find live on the other planets. For people, have always interested in: Is there life on other planet that our now? And on such case it is not a pity to spend money and labor. I fully agree with that spend more money on researching life on another planets where no more that three people have ever set foot. Certainly, equipment for located a life, examine the earth and sand, analyze the air and so on very expensive. From another point of view, for our planet, in addition, to ptoblema with natural problems and there is a human threat. natural problems such as tsunami, earthquake, huracane and global warming can contribute us leave the earth. On the other hand, we force ourselves to leave our native land because we do everything for it. For example, we trash everywhere, throw waste into the sea and so on. But in order to force themselves to spend a lot of money. We can just save our planet and live on without spending a cent. But we can investigate money to survey other planets for other planet for fun. In conclusion, i want to say lets not force the earth to throw us out, but save it and keep money.
Sure, in the future survive on the
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will be difficult for various reasons. Due to the fact
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peoplesruin
and
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destroy
all on the world.
Because of this
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government
highlights much
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money
for exploring and find
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live
on the
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other
planets.

For
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people
, have always interested in: Is there life on
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other
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planet
that our
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now
? And on such case it is not a pity to spend
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money
and labor.

I
fully
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agree
with that spend more
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money
on researching life on another
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planets
where no more that three
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people
have ever set foot.
Certainly
, equipment for located a life, examine the
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earth
and sand, analyze the air and
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so
on
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very
expensive.

From another point of view, for our
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planet
,
in addition
, to
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ptoblema
with natural problems and there is a human threat.
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natural
problems such as tsunami, earthquake,
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huracane
and global warming can contribute us
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leave
the
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earth
. On the
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other
hand, we force ourselves to
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leave
our native land
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because
we do everything for it.
For example
, we trash everywhere, throw waste into the sea and
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so
on.
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But
in order to force themselves to spend
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a lot of
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money
. We can
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just
save our
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planet
and
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live
on without spending a cent.
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But
we can investigate
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money
to survey
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other
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planets
for
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other
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planet
for fun.

In conclusion
,
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i
want to say
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lets
not force the
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earth
to throw us out,
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but
save it and
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keep
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money
.
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IELTS essay In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. with this statement?

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