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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations. v. 8
Nowadays in a lot of countries life expectancy has growing more than earlier. Increasing life expectancy has more problems. There are problems for the society in general. Average global life expectancy is currently 71. 5 years. In the countries with the worst health life expectancy is between 50 and 60 years. Globally the life expectancy increased from less than 30 years to over 72 years; after two centuries of progress we can expect to live much more than twice as long as our ancestors. And this progress was not achieved in a few places. In every world region people today can expect to live more than twice as long If life expectency grows, it will be overpopulation, it will lead to overload. So that we should decide this. Firstly, It is necessary to publish more and more policies to attract young workers from developing or underdeveloped countries. It can not only solves the current shortage situations but also helps to improve the economy. Secondly, the construction of private health facilities is also a good method to reduce the overload of hospitals. In addition, schools should educate for young people about the importance of saving money for retirement because when retiring they can pay for themselves demands without depend on their children or the government. Finally, the authorities should encourage to increased birthrates as it will bring the country back to the era of golden population. In conclusion, aging population have caused many issues but various methods could be taken to reduce it.
Nowadays in
a lot of
countries
life
expectancy has growing more than earlier. Increasing
life
expectancy has more problems. There are problems for the society
in general
.

Average global
life
expectancy is
currently
71. 5 years. In the
countries
with the worst health
life
expectancy is between 50 and 60 years. Globally the
life
expectancy increased from less than 30 years to over 72 years; after two centuries of progress we can
expect
to
live
much more than twice as long as our ancestors. And this progress was not achieved in a few places. In every world region
people
today
can
expect
to
live
more than twice as
long


If
life
expectency
grows, it will be overpopulation, it will lead to overload.
So that
we should decide this.
Firstly
, It is necessary to publish more and more policies to attract young workers from developing or underdeveloped
countries
. It can not
only
solves
the
current
shortage situations
but
also
helps
to
improve
the economy.
Secondly
, the construction of private health facilities is
also
a
good
method to
reduce
the overload of hospitals.
In addition
, schools should educate for young
people
about the importance of saving money for retirement
because
when retiring they can pay for themselves demands without depend on their children or the
government
.
Finally
, the authorities should encourage to increased birthrates as it will bring the
country
back to the era of golden population.

In conclusion
, aging population have caused
many
issues
but
various methods could
be taken
to
reduce
it.
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IELTS essay In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

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