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in some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects and boys tend to choose science subjects. Why do you think this is so? should this tendency be changed?

in some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects and boys tend to choose science subjects. Why do you think this is so? should this tendency be changed? dBPE
it is generally seen that the prefence is usually given to arts related subjects by girls when they enter schools or universities, whilst boys go to subject is science. This essay will highlight the potential reasons behind this practice and also elaborate whether changes need to be done or not. Two prime reasons can be attributed to this situation. firstly because the culture of the place shapes a persons thinking, this is the most contributing factor in the subject selection.
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to arts related subjects by girls when they enter schools or universities, whilst boys go to subject is science. This essay will highlight the potential reasons behind this practice and
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the culture of the place shapes a persons thinking, this is the most contributing factor in the subject selection.

IELTS essay in some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects and boys tend to choose science subjects. Why do you think this is so? should this tendency be changed?

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  American English
2 paragraphs
80 words
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