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In some places where is very difficult to obtain (get) construction license and built documentation

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On the other hand, I believe that there are also some difficulties when they choose to build houses in their own styles. Firstly, in some places where is very difficult to obtain (get) construction license (permit) and built documentation. The design drawings and structure of the house after construction are very carefully checked by a competent authority. Secondly, Building a house is very complicate and big job, so construction costs are carefully calculated and estimated. Avoid costs incurred when conducting construction.
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, I believe that there are
also
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some
difficulties when they choose to build
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houses
in their
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own
styles.
Firstly
, in
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some
places where is
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very
difficult to obtain (
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get
)
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construction
license (permit) and built documentation. The design drawings and structure of the
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house
after
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construction
are
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very
carefully
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checked
by a competent authority.
Secondly
, Building a
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house
is
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very
complicate and
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big
job,
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so
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construction
costs are
carefully
calculated and estimated. Avoid costs incurred when conducting
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construction
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IELTS essay In some places where is very difficult to obtain (get) construction license and built documentation

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  American English
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