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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Various cultures affect differently how people bring up their children. In some, people make their children believe that when they do their best, they can succeed anything they want to. In this essay, I will outline the perceived drawbacks of giving this message to children, and explain why I feel that there are far more significant advantages. It can be thought that making children believe they can accomplish anything they want, as long as they try hard enough might cause harm on children's personality. I t might be the case because if their children fail, their relationship might be affected and they might not be reliable on their childre's eyes. Therefore, some people prefer to be realistic and do not want to ruin the relationship with their children for even a slight chance.

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