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In some counyries few people are getting high salaries .some people think it is not good and government shouod set somr restrictions on it . Do you agree or disagree.

In some counyries few people are getting high salaries. some people think it is not good and government shouod set somr restrictions on it. DaVnW
It would Not be incorrect to state that scores of people Living all over the globe in these times are getting lucrative packages, whether from public or private companies. Many an individual believe that high authorities should set cap on this tendency. I totally disagree with this owing to some reasons that I will explain in the upcoming paragraph. Providing hefty amount of money to workers for their positive contribution toward an organization as well as a society is justifiable due to number of reasons. In the first place, people who achieved this level of salary have done their legitimate work and struggle for many years of life to enjoy the success, not least monetary one, whereas Bureaucrats show their continuous determination to crack a worlds toughest exams and finally reach that level. Keeping in Mind this thing, it is logical to assume that this step can go against the professional ethics. It is worth mentioning that if a nation administrations start to control the income of workers, then there is every hope that later will not put their heart and soul toward organizations and therefore will deliver less powerful result at workplace. Beside, could be considered is that more the difference is in the salaries of people more are chances of increased efforts of people who join the work place. To explained that it is in appropriate between the pay scale that stops the worker to reach their highest and this eliminating the productivity of people as well as a nation. Nestle prestigious organization, which is providing state of the art amenities to their workers just because to achieve a success on a larger extent. Lastly if lawmakers put cap on high salaries than employees may not able to show their authentic talent toward acme point. At last it can be summed up that there is no doubt it is hard to pay huge salaries to worthy, judicious people, but I would like to reiterate that only by availing appropriate salaries to the employees, one nation can grow their business in this cutthroat Competition.
It would Not be incorrect to state that scores of
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people
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companies
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Many
an individual believe that high authorities should set cap on this tendency. I
totally
disagree with this owing to
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some
reasons that I will
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explain
in the upcoming paragraph.

Providing hefty amount of money to
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workers
for their
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positive
contribution toward an organization
as well
as a society is justifiable due to number of reasons. In the
first
place,
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people
who achieved this level of
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salary
have done their legitimate work and struggle for
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many
years of life to enjoy the success, not
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least
monetary one, whereas Bureaucrats
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show
their continuous determination to crack
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a worlds
A determiner is probably missing here: "the toughest".
toughest
exams and
finally
reach that level. Keeping in Mind this thing, it is logical to assume that this step can go against the professional ethics. It is worth mentioning that if a nation administrations
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start
to control the income of
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workers
, then there is every hope that later will not put their heart and soul toward organizations and
therefore
will deliver less powerful result at workplace.

Beside, could
be considered
is that more the difference is in the
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salaries
of
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people
more are chances of increased efforts of
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people
who
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join
the work place. To
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explained
that it is in appropriate between the pay scale that
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stops
the
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worker
to reach their highest and this eliminating the productivity of
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people
as well
as a nation. Nestle prestigious organization, which is providing
Did you mean "state-of-the-art"?
state of the art
amenities to their
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workers
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just
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because
to achieve a success on a larger extent.
Lastly
if lawmakers put cap on high
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salaries
than employees may not able to
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show
their authentic talent toward acme point.

At
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last it
can
be summed
up that there is no doubt it is
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hard
to pay huge
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salaries
to worthy, judicious
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people
,
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but
I would like to reiterate that
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only
by availing appropriate
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salaries
to the employees, one nation can grow their business in this cutthroat Competition.
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IELTS essay In some counyries few people are getting high salaries. some people think it is not good and government shouod set somr restrictions on it.

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