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In recent years the technologies increased rapidly and besides e-platforms playing vital role in our daily lifestyle. Moreover the online shopping are also part of our regular routine. By using this e-platforms we can face consequences in a form of pros and cons as well. In this essay we will discuss disadvantages of online shopping. Firstly, In online shopping the delivery of products may takes a long time along with the quality of product may be cheap than expected. we can't able touch or feel of a product which we ordered. however sometimes the cost of items can be an arm and leg. In addition to online shopping their are many claims about fraud system in internet. For instance, at times we may receives second hand items in low mark. Those products will damage frequently likewise their are mays complaints about commodity. Furthermore. In online we can't able to bargain on products and plus discounts are shallow this means their is no chance of shopping experience. quite few times we are confused about the products based on reviews. people now-a- days are willing to shop online due to shortage of time not only in few areas but also quite continually are scams are taking part in major cities. In conclusion, usage of online shopping haves both advantages and disadvantages. we should aware about every thing while we are going to selecting goods for e platforms. In my opinion online shopping has more benefits than normal traditional shopping
In recent years the technologies increased
rapidly
and
besides
e-platforms playing vital role in our daily lifestyle.
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the
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are
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part of our regular routine. By using this e-platforms we can face consequences in a form of pros and cons
as well
. In this essay we will discuss disadvantages of
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online
shopping.

Firstly
, In
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the delivery of
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products
may takes a long
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time
along with the quality of
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product
may be
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cheap
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we
can't able touch or feel of a
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which we ordered.
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however
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sometimes
the cost of items can be an arm and leg.
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to
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online
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shopping
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are
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many
claims about fraud system in internet.
For instance
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we may
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second hand items in low mark. Those
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products
will damage
frequently
likewise
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mays
complaints about commodity.

Furthermore
. In
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we can't able to bargain on
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products
and plus discounts are shallow this means
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is no chance of
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shopping
experience.
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quite
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times
we
are confused
about the
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based on reviews.
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people
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now
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online
due to shortage of
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not
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also
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continually
are scams are taking part in major cities.

In conclusion
, usage of
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online
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haves both advantages and disadvantages.
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we
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should aware
about every thing while we are
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goods
for e platforms. In my opinion
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online
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has more benefits than normal traditional
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shopping
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IELTS essay disadvantages of online shopping in our opinion

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
246 words
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