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In some countries privately owned transport systems have poor safety record. Yet it is the government who have ultimate responsibility for public safety. How can government ensure that private transport companies do not neglect safety regulations?

In some countries privately owned transport systems have poor safety record. Yet it is the government who have ultimate responsibility for public safety. How can government ensure that private transport companies do not neglect safety regulations? Je9D

Government is undoubtedly responsible for the security of their citizen. Thus, they should not let private vehicles company to violate the safety rules. They can minimize road accidents by introducing strict laws, inspection and fine system. On the one hand, government should formulate strong rules against the breakage of traffic regulations. It should be followed both public and private transport companies. Enforcing laws could bring notable change in traffic management. For example, compulsory insurance policy provide financial aids towards the victims of accident. Furthermore, strict implementation of law remind vehicle owner about the consequences of neglectful behavior. On the other hand, traffic insecurities could be uplift by good inspection of Transportation Company. New rules could be suggested through checking the condition of personal vehicles and companies. If there is disregard of regulations there will be penalty of charges. For instance, if owners are encounter with breaking rules, they will be charged with certain amount of money. Moreover, there should be punishment according to nature of violation of rules. This may help to control the reckless activities. To sum up, I strongly believe that the safety of public could be assured by government with improvising policies and examining current condition of private companies.

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Government
 is undoubtedly
 responsible for the security of their citizen. Thus
, they should not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
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company
 to violate the safety You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatutedecreeprecedentguidelineregulationruling
rules
. They can minimize road accidents by introducing strict laws, inspection and fine system.

On the one hand, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should formulate strong You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatutedecreeprecedentguidelineregulationruling
rules
 against the breakage of traffic regulations. It should be followed
 both public and private transport You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
. Enforcing laws could bring notable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in traffic management. For example
, compulsory insurance policy provide financial aids towards the victims of accident. Furthermore
, strict implementation of law remind vehicle owner about the consequences of neglectful behavior.

On the other hand
, traffic insecurities could be uplift by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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Company
. New You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatutedecreeprecedentguidelineregulationruling
rules
 could be suggested
 through checking the condition of personal vehicles and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 there is disregard of regulations there will be penalty of charges. For instance
, if owners are encounter with breaking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatutedecreeprecedentguidelineregulationruling
rules
, they will be charged
 with certain amount of money. Moreover
, there should be punishment according to nature of violation of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatutedecreeprecedentguidelineregulationruling
rules
. This may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to control the reckless activities.

To sum up, I strongly
 believe that the safety of public could be assured
 by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 with improvising policies and examining This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 condition of private You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
. 