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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? naYl
Globally, thousands of companies are trading in international market that’s why customers have plethora of choices available in market. Folk can easily buy same product anywhere in the world. Both positive and negative development will be discussed in further paragraphs. First of all, global market through numerous items, services are available everywhere. People have lot of choices nowadays in every single product with different quality and quantity. Therefore, job opportunities, GDP of country, import exports have been increasing on daily basis. In addition relationships are rising with other countries further we get opportunities to know their culture and learn new things. Let’s clear with illustration, world global market researchers prove that after globalization in the world there are less chances to make customer fool and also 70% transactions are rose after globalization in international and national market However, International market brings many benefits for country but there are two things which have negative effect. First, multinational companies product are very expensive which can’t afford lower class and middles class seldomly buy this costly things. Second, many local markets suffering from huge loss because foreign companies capture their market. For example, Macdonald and dominos destroy local fast food shops and market In summary, I believe that international market connect countries with each other and also it’s beneficial for customer, they can easily buy any product anywhere and also their technology development, infrastructure we can easily adopt their things owning to this I deem that is positive development.
Globally, thousands of
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are trading in
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international
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market
that’s why customers have plethora of choices available in
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market
. Folk can
easily
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buy
same
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product
anywhere in the world. Both
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positive
and
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negative
development will
be discussed
in
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paragraphs.

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market
through numerous items, services are available everywhere.
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People
have
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lot of
choices nowadays in every single
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product
with
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different
quality and quantity.
Therefore
, job opportunities, GDP of
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country
, import exports have been increasing on daily basis. In
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addition
relationships are rising with other
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countries
further
we
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get
opportunities to know their culture and learn new things.
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’s
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with illustration, world global
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market
researchers prove that after globalization in the world there are
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less
chances to
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make
customer fool and
also
70% transactions are rose after globalization in
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international
and national
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market


However
,
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International
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market
brings
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benefits for
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country
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but
there are two things which have
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negative
effect.
First
, multinational
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companies
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product
are
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class
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seldomly
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this costly things. Second,
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local markets suffering from huge loss
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foreign
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companies
capture their
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.
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, Macdonald and
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dominos
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destroy
local
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fast
food shops and
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market


In summary, I believe that
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international
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market
connect
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countries
with each other and
also
it’s beneficial for customer, they can
easily
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buy
any
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product
anywhere and
also
their technology development, infrastructure we can
easily
adopt their things owning to this I deem
that is
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positive
development.
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IELTS essay Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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