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In some countries, people are purchasing fever new items and more second-hand goods. What are the reasons for this?is this a positive or negative trend

In some countries, people are purchasing fever new items and more second-hand goods. What are the reasons for this? is this a positive or negative trend 2ba2J
Nowadays, people give more preference to second hand items and theya are less buying to modern things. It is a positive trend but it also considers some negative points On the one hand, massea are buying old items it is very beneficial for them because first of all these things are cheap as compare to new items. For instance middle class and impoverisht people can easily afford these things in thir tiny budget. Moreover it also helps to reduce wastage and rubbish of city. For example if people purchase new things they wiil throw old ones which creates too much pollution and harsh for our environment. Furthermore, poor people can also enjoy fascinating items and they can make their life more comfortable. On the other hand, there are some drawbacks of this trend that sometimes old things do not work because of some technical issues. For example some electronic gadgets do not work properly such as mobile phone, laptop, water filter and so on. In addition to this some time people get great loss when they have tho change those items so they have to pay again for those items. In conclusion, it is true that second hand items are good for people as that are less costly and easily affordable but people should check them properly before purchasing because sometimes they buy wrong items which gives loss to masses.
Nowadays,
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give more preference to second
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items
and
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are less buying to modern things. It is a
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positive
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On the one
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hand
,
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massea
are buying
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old
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items
it is
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very
beneficial for them
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because
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first of all
these things are
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cheap
as compare to new
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items
.
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middle
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class
and
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impoverisht
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people
can
easily
afford these things in
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tiny budget.
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it
also
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helps
to
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reduce
wastage and rubbish of city.
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if
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people
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purchase
new things they
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wiil
throw
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old
ones which creates too much pollution and harsh for our environment.
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, poor
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people
can
also
enjoy fascinating
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items and
they can
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make
their life more comfortable.

On the other
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hand
, there are
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some
drawbacks of this trend that
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sometimes
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old
things do not work
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because
of
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some
technical issues.
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some
electronic gadgets do not work
properly
such as mobile phone, laptop, water filter and
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so
on.
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to this
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some
time
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people
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great loss when they have tho
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change
those
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items
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they
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have to
pay again for those items.

In conclusion
, it is true that second
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hand
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items
are
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good
for
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people
as that are less costly and
easily
affordable
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but
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people
should
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check
them
properly
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before
purchasing
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because
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sometimes
they
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buy
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wrong
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items
which gives loss to masses.
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IELTS essay In some countries, people are purchasing fever new items and more second-hand goods. What are the reasons for this? is this a positive or negative trend

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