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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? jXrL
In a number of nations, owning a house is more important than renting one because of several reasons. Firstly, purchasing a house is a sort of long-term investment. Secondly, renting one restricts the people for making the house more comfortable. To some extent, owning a home totally outweigh various adverse effects which might emerge. In many cases, purchasing a house is most likely as a good long-term investment. Buying a house in not only for satisfying primary needs for everyone, but also to implement a strategy on gaining multiple profits for the next decades. Although there are many of alternatives schemes, investing on property could highly possibly giving much more revenues for the investors because the trend of property prices has been escalating since the boom of the emerging middle-income family. For instance, most of the new family will considerably select a variety of new houses provided by a lot of housing developers which compete each other for offering the best benefits. Instead of merely relying on the house rate, the consumer might usually calculate the prospect of the location with exchanging of economic benefits for the long term. Another thing is relating of the people’s autonomy on their home. Indeed, renting accommodation will free the people from the business for taking care of the house stuffs, such as ceiling repairing, fixing the broken water tap, or cleaning the surrounding area. For overcoming these issues, the people just only need to contact the house owner without being charged of extra payment. However, inhabiting the other’s property means for fully committing to the owner’s rule of thumb. Every renting accommodation drafts the strict rules either in written form or oral announcement to be obeyed by all of the inhabitants. Take a student dormitory as an example. The authority does not hesitate to blame the people who break the written rule by conducting some activities which potentially could harm the others such as decorating the house, mounting the photograph of the wall, or initiating to paint the wall with something new colour. In my perspective, I am on the same page with the former argumentation. In several countries, having own property can solve two problems simultaneously both for fulfilling the needs of shelter as well as for taking a step to make highly potential investment. Furthermore, the total expenditure between crediting a house and renting monthly accommodation is almost similar in the total amount of money the people would spent. So, there are no excuse for every people to start property investment as early as possible. To summarize, there are two foundations that underlie the importance of buying a home. With the consideration of the high return of investment and the flexibility of house treatment, I believe that purchasing a home has transformed from a conventional point of view to a sort of long-lasting life strategy.
In a number of nations, owning a
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is more
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important
than
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renting
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because
of several reasons.
Firstly
, purchasing a
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house
is a sort of long-term
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investment
.
Secondly
,
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renting
one restricts the
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people
for making the
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house
more comfortable. To
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some
extent, owning a home
totally
outweigh various adverse effects which might emerge.

In
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many
cases, purchasing a
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house
is most likely as a
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good
long-term
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investment
. Buying a
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house
in not
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only
for satisfying primary needs for everyone,
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but
also
to implement a strategy on gaining multiple profits for the
next
decades. Although there are
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many
of alternatives schemes, investing on
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property
could
highly
possibly
giving much more revenues for the investors
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because
the trend of
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property
prices has been escalating since the boom of the emerging middle-income family.
For instance
, most of the new family will
considerably
select a variety of new
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houses
provided by
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a lot of
housing developers which compete each other for offering the best benefits.
Instead
of
merely
relying on the
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house
rate, the consumer might
usually
calculate the prospect of the location with exchanging of economic benefits for the long term.

Another thing is relating of the
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people’s
autonomy on their home.
Indeed
,
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renting
accommodation will free the
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people
from the business for taking care of the
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house
stuffs, such as ceiling repairing, fixing the broken water tap, or cleaning the surrounding area. For overcoming these issues, the
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people
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just
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only
need to contact the
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house
owner without
being charged
of extra payment.
However
, inhabiting the other’s
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property
means for
fully
committing to the owner’s
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rule
of thumb. Every
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renting
accommodation drafts the strict
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
either in written form or oral announcement to
be obeyed
by
Consider using "all the".
all of the
inhabitants. Take a student dormitory as an example. The authority does not hesitate to blame the
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people
who break the written
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
by conducting
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some
activities which
potentially
could harm the others such as decorating the
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house
, mounting the photograph of the wall, or initiating to paint the wall with something new
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colour
.

In my perspective, I am on the same page with the former argumentation. In several countries, having
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
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property
can solve two problems
simultaneously
both for fulfilling the needs of shelter
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as well as
for taking a step to
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make
highly
potential
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investment
.
Furthermore
, the total expenditure between crediting a
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house
and
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renting
monthly accommodation is almost similar in the total amount of money the
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people
would
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spent
.
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So
, there are no excuse for every
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people
to
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start
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property
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investment
as early as possible.

To summarize
, there are two foundations that underlie the importance of buying a home. With the consideration of the high return of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
investment
and the flexibility of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
treatment, I believe that purchasing a home has transformed from a conventional point of view to a sort of long-lasting life strategy.
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IELTS essay In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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