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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home? l5QD
It cannot be denied fact that in some nations, many of masses want to leave on renu because some of them not available to afford that much expensive houses this essay will discuss advantage and disadvantages in upcoming paragraph before portraying any relevant conclusion To commence with, nobody can gainsay the fact that in modern era people have busy schedules firstly, many of masses not buying houses because people are do not have enough time for example person who doing job if that person transfer in other city so that will usually will leave on rent rather buying it moreover some of people do not sufficient budget to get experience house so are happy to in rent houses they can easily pay short rent for monthly finally, person who living on rent that area environment is not so good they can easily get other house in other direction On other hand, nowadays many of countries are facing problem regarding budget firsly, buying their house is more beneficial for them for the reason that they do not want pay money for rent and person have freedom to do everything in his house like, if that person do not like his home design they can can change structure of house moreover, masses can also get good source of income for instance, some property rate goes up and down if there rate up they can sell there house in high income and they can home in other distinctions In conclusion, in my opinion most of masses choose to leave on rent due to the costly houses. and some of buy their own private housesThe rendered pillar chat depicts information regarding changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand in the time period of 1901 till 2101 To begin with, In 1901 birth rate was higher than death rate it stood at 20, 000 and death rate was 10, 000 since 1921 it show rise approximately 11, 000 and natality rate fall down in 1941 was 25, 000 however death rate steady show increase till 2001 was near about 29, 000 Moving further, In 1941 fertility rate show gradual increase and it reaches its peak point about 65, 000 in 1961 and death rate show rise upto 59, 000 in 2041 and birth rate dropped down about 50, 000 and in 2001 it rise 60, 000 after some year it showed gradual decrease till 2101 was 41, 000 of death rate Overall, it is lucid that birth rate and death showed upward and downward trend in every year
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this essay will discuss advantage and disadvantages in upcoming paragraph
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portraying any relevant conclusion

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of masses not buying
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houses
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because
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people
are do not have
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transfer in
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city
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that will
usually
will
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they can
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that area environment is not
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in
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direction

On
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hand, nowadays
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of countries are facing problem regarding budget
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firsly
, buying their
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is more beneficial for them for the reason that they do not want pay money for
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and
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have freedom to do everything in his
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like, if that
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do not like his home design they
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property
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goes up and down if there
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up they can sell there
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in high
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income and
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in New Zealand in the time period of 1901 till 2101

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with, In 1901
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was higher than death
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it stood at 20, 000 and death
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was 10, 000 since 1921 it
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rise approximately 11, 000 and
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natality
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fall down in 1941 was 25, 000
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death
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steady
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increase till 2001 was near about 29, 000

Moving
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, In 1941 fertility
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gradual increase and it reaches its peak point about 65, 000 in 1961 and death
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rise
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59, 000 in 2041 and
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60, 000 after
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gradual decrease till 2101 was 41, 000 of death rate

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, it is lucid that
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upward and downward trend in every year
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IELTS essay In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
425 words
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