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In some countries, it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these view.

The early you learn, the early you begin. Many nations are encouraging academic learnings from the beginning of their birth. Others, however, believe that one should not make them occupied in define training and can make them disinterest in future teachings. In this essay, I will elicit upon the rational supporting my views then only I will give my opinion. To begin with, initial learnings is very essential in one's life and by introducing structured tuition may inculcate various required skills among the juvenile, such as being confident and having good communication, it is very well proven by the researcher that from the age of 0 to 5years old kid, their brain function three times faster than the adult and this is the best time to get them acquainted with vital studies. As much as the teaching they get to explore, it aids them in getting familiar with things around. To exemplify, it was said by the world richest man Mr. Bill gate that the initial 5 years of a human being, decide the next 85 years of their life and this has been followed by various parents around the globe. On the other hand, there is a small section of society which have a different point of view. The kids should learn on their own and should not restrict to the school preparation, this may stop them from being creative. Such pedagogy commonly pressurized the toddlers and may result in less interest in university education when actually needed. To illustrate, according to the survey done by the University of Delhi, most of the kids do not like the early tuitions and more interested in extra curriculum activities only. To conclude, in my opinion, I firmly believe that early preparation makes youngster fast learner and a good performer in their exams and which eventually give them a bright future ahead.
The
early
you learn, the
early
you
begin
.
Many
nations are encouraging academic learnings from the beginning of their birth. Others,
however
, believe that one should not
make
them occupied in define training and can
make
them disinterest in future teachings. In this essay, I will elicit upon the rational supporting my views then
only
I will give my opinion.

To
begin
with, initial learnings is
very
essential in one's life and by introducing structured tuition may inculcate various required
skills
among the juvenile, such as being confident and having
good
communication, it is
very
well proven by the researcher that from the age of 0 to 5years
old
kid, their brain function three times faster than the adult and this is the best time to
get
them acquainted with vital studies. As much as the teaching they
get
to explore, it aids them in getting familiar with things around. To exemplify, it
was said
by the world richest
man
Mr. Bill gate that the initial 5 years of a human being, decide the
next
85 years of their life and this has
been followed
by various parents around the globe.

On the other hand
, there is a
small
section of society which have a
different
point of view. The kids should learn on their
own
and should not restrict to the school preparation, this may
stop
them from being creative. Such pedagogy
commonly
pressurized the toddlers and may result in less interest in university education when actually needed. To illustrate, according to the survey done by the University of Delhi, most of the kids do not like the
early
tuitions
and more interested in extra curriculum activities
only
.

To conclude
, in my opinion, I
firmly
believe that
early
preparation
makes
youngster
fast
learner and a
good
performer in their exams and which
eventually
give them a bright future ahead.
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IELTS essay In some countries, it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these view.

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