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In some countries around the world men and women are having children at a later age than in the past.what are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

In some countries around the world men and women are having children at a later age than in the past. what are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life? 1X6N
In the modern century male and female decide to give birth to children in the latter in the life after settled the future rather than the past. In this essay will highlighted what are the causes behind this situation and consequences on families and societies. To begin with, there are many causes why parents birth their kids in the latter age. First and most prominent is that in state art of the world women firstly setted their career rather the family plan. They more focous on their good education and well settled job. For example, last year expert research 95% of coupled firstly migrate in the America afterthat they birth their kids. Not to mention, nowadays everyone think that firstly they deposit a money for better lifestyle of their children in the society because as compare to the past everything is costly as food, education, clothes and other things. Moreover, one of the main reason is that new some couples are lived seperate for some personal problems thus, they choose to give born children in latter age. There are various upshots on society and familes. Firstly, when babies born by old ages they face many difficulties releated to mental and physical problems which result is low quality workforce in the future. Is there any other drawbacks to give the birth kids on more age? Truly, the gap between parents and children will be expanded if children born in later age. The guardians are highly likely to have many difficulties in understanding, communcation and education. At last, if increasing number of female delaying to birth the kids, people might have to live in a society with the problem of agening population. And it ending up society face the difficulties in future. To conclude, there are many reasons of having birth to children on a later age but families and society face many difficulties in the future. Therefore, young people should learn to every responsibility regarding career, married life, bith to children.
In the modern century male and female decide to give
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in the latter in the life after settled the
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what are the causes behind this situation and consequences on families and
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societies
. To
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causes why parents
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in the latter
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.
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and most prominent is that in state art of the world women
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firstly
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setted
their career
rather
the family plan. They more
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focous
on their
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good
education and well settled job.
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, last year expert research 95% of coupled
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migrate in the America
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afterthat
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birth
their
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kids
. Not to mention, nowadays everyone
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they deposit
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a money
for better lifestyle of their
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children
in the
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, one of the main reason is that new
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some
couples are
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seperate
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some
personal problems
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, they choose to give born
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children
in latter
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age
. There are various upshots on
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and
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.
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, when babies born by
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they face
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releated
to mental and physical problems which result is low quality workforce in the
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future
. Is there any other drawbacks to give the
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birth
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kids
on more
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age
?
Truly
, the gap between parents and
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children
will
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if
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children
born in later
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. The guardians are
highly
likely to have
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difficulties
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communcation
and education. At last, if increasing number of female delaying to
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the
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,
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with the problem of
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, there are
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reasons of having
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age
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families and
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should learn to every responsibility regarding career, married life,
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bith
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children
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IELTS essay In some countries around the world men and women are having children at a later age than in the past. what are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

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